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for Black Heart

by leylia

person Khloe
schedule May 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Write more! Surely this can't be the end? Why don't they go back to England and get married when Wendy is 20 and then have a family? Why can't it be cute? Disney ruins my expectations lol. More pleeease? Xx
person guest
schedule October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it! amazing story!
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've got me captivated! Damn that mean, vengeful, handsome, strong pirate captain for making me swoon! :)

Please update soon or I shall have to be forced to live in reality for far too long... :D
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was good.. Can't wait for more.. alert me if you ud.. bignsassy8181@yahoo.com!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg you SO have to continue!!! Im dying here! lol
person rema cyphers
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
need another chapter... need more... love story... love writing... ::faints::
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter next chapter please
person Anon
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update i want to no what happens next
person ancientgirl
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was pretty harsh. I can understand why he was so pissed though. I have to say I have never liked Peter Pan, not even when I was a child. I always saw him as a spoiled brat with no respect for other people or their property. I really can't blame Hook for being so angry especially after his ship was being burned. But I can also understand why Elanor stopped him, since she did not want to have him kill anyone. I can't wait to read how you make things better, or are you?
person anonymous
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
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