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for Black Heart

by leylia

person Red Queen
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the story, keep up the good work. Please update I wanna no what happens. Please please please continue
person Catweazel
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for your update!
person Utena the Black Rose
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Please continue soon!
person Fleur
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is a really good story! Please continue and don't vanish....I would really like tad mad more! Update soon!!!!!
person pixie
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! lovign every bit of it ...thank u xxxx
person anonymous
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you're writing this story and i love the plot. PLease update as soon as you can.
person anonymous
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the way you ended the chapter with her saying that she would work on deck but she was disappointed that the captain stopped kissing her. Please update as soon as you can because i'm anxious to know what happens.
person anonymous
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as yo can!!
person Divinity
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
By all that is holy, please don't stop updating yet :) Usually people kick out a spoof then just...vanish. Please don't do that :) Continue and get a good chapter or two and I'll give you a real review, I promise :) E-mail me if you need any help/advice!
person Konta T
schedule January 30, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea!!!! Great chapter, was so happt to see this updated !!! Hopefully you will update a touch quicker :)
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