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You honestly don't know how much I love you. I am such a fan of Hook\Pan fiction, and as many of your readers have pointed out, you have excellent tone, prose and creativity. You do justice to so much more than the characters.

how i wish you'd finish! pan deserves a good ending!

You need to FINISH this

routine scan of you work reveals a perfect wordflow and an amazing concept. beautiful. i can believe this pan, and i love this hook.

interesting......MORE!

I know you love this couple far too much to let it die, please return.

So I guess this means you're ending it here? How unfortunate, I really enjoyed this story. It's the first fanfic I've read where actual human emotions have been so masterfully ascribed to the characters without resorting to cliche or PWP standards. Here's hoping it is ever finished.

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i was recommended youre fanfiction by a friend with a history of exaggerating things; this time it appeared they could not be more apt in their generous praise. heres hoping you pick it up again, would love to read more.

lolita...

Please, I need to know how this ends!