rate_review Reviews

this is the best pan fic on this site and any other, it's a shame you've dropped the story. i wish you'd return...

This is such a great story!!! i really love the way you write, it's very enterntaining. I also enjoyed all the psychology behind the characters. How very slowly Peter begins to develop Stalkhom syndrome, even if he denies his love for Hook it is still there. I'm guessing it's why instead of killing him when he had the chance he saves his life and tries to get him to some sort of shelter.
Overall it's a facinating story, you should finish it....but since it's been so long since you last posted, the chance of that happening is mostly very slim.
Anyways, thanks for writing this, and i really enjoyed it even if its not finished!
Keep writing
~A Fan of Pan

PS
I don't expect you to answer this, so don't worry about it
....sorry for all the spelling errors....

I simply adore your writing techniques; never have I seen done what you have with these characters, and I applaud you all the more for it. I hope you return to this story.

Quin.

Man I love this story. I can't believe it hasn't been updated for two years. Guess it's officially dead? That's too bad. It was a pretty deep story.

I've read this story so many times now! I can never get sick of it! It's some awesome work! Very disturbing and dark for sure, but still an awesome work. I had hoped it'd be updated, but you're probably busy. I know I got very busy once I started college, nothing but homework and exams for me. Yaaay. -_- Anyway, I just wanted to say I like your style and you've got some talent.

Ho gosh...

I love you...

XD I'm in Peter Pan (the play) as the Croc, Nana, and a Lost Boy...so I felt the Croc's pain. Damn it. D: Whatever happened to the Lost Boys?

Oh man, this is the best Peter Pan fanfiction I've ever found. And...How I wish you'd write more...!

I also appreciate the lack of grammatical stupidity of your story. >:( It's so hard to find a decent writer these days!!

do continue...i dont want to have to beg

You really must continue this story. Well-written, intriguing, in-character and simply stunning. I have to know how Peter and Hook end up.

Please don't end it here! Continue it at once!

Aw I hope you continue this one day! I really want to see how Peter and Hook's relationship develop together now that Hook's at the mercy of Peter instead! I really do hope you continue this. I re-read all the chapters all the time. :(