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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps having Peter unable to orgasm is merely a choice you have made that suits your preference, but boys of any age can have orgasm, albiet dry ones, but immensely pleasurable none the less. I think allowing such would improve the story, not detract from it. I find your fic well written, but because of Peter's inability to orgasm I find it disappointing.
Your reference to the games of the naughty fairies is titillating
Your reference to the games of the naughty fairies is titillating
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah so you did have a purpose for not allowing poor Peter to orgasm . What a horrific trade off - the most pleasurable experience man can have versus eternal youth and life. Good symbolism
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing. It's so raw with emotion. A true sign of a great writer. I'm interested in the tense relationship between Hook and Pan, now that the situation has taken an ironic twist. Will they overcome their past animosities toward eachother and pursue a relationship? Keep up the good work! I look forward to the completion of your story.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you added more!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that's brutal. brilliant, but brutal none the less
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Er... apologies, Lover of Yaoi. My HTML got messed up... So there are two new chapters, one of which details what you wanted to read. Thanks for alerting me! :X
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD IM HAPPY! I was gonna read another story on AFF but i clicked this link automaticly because i check every day to see if it's updated. So i say to myself "opps, oh well maybe i'll read this one for the billionth time again then i click on the chapters and theres another one!!!!!!!!!
I WAS SCREAMING WITH JOY! This is my favorite story on Aff.net! But i was really dissapointed that you didnt make a few chapters out of Peter first going to the idian camp, hook getting kicked off the ship, and them meeting each other again wasnt very touching :( It's just that i expected a little more drama..But i'm still thrilled your adding more chapters! Make more or this suspention might send me to an early grave >.<'
I WAS SCREAMING WITH JOY! This is my favorite story on Aff.net! But i was really dissapointed that you didnt make a few chapters out of Peter first going to the idian camp, hook getting kicked off the ship, and them meeting each other again wasnt very touching :( It's just that i expected a little more drama..But i'm still thrilled your adding more chapters! Make more or this suspention might send me to an early grave >.<'
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are there going to be anymore chapters? PLEASE SAY IT'S SO!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are there going to be any more chapters?
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though its been about a year ago since you finished I hope you read this review. I think this was a cool fanfic I just wished Peter had a happier ending also what happend to the boys and Wendy. seems like you can keep going with this fanfic, with, Peter going back to hook