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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I read the fic, all in one sitting. Good job. But I'm sorry, but Hook is a completely disgusting individual in your story. He does nothing to justify anything else he did at the beginning. Peter only likes him when he's been brainwashed. The whole beginning of any sort of "relationship" between them was when Peter's sanity broke down that one night. I don't think he ever quite recovered. And that bit about Hook's daughter! Oh yuck.
So why, why do I feel like I want them to get back together now that I read it to te end? It's a totally toxic relationship and compelling maybe because it is so toxic.
So why, why do I feel like I want them to get back together now that I read it to te end? It's a totally toxic relationship and compelling maybe because it is so toxic.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*still begs for more*
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe I actually never reviewed this. It's been on my favorites list forever. Though it seems you've abandoned it which is sad. It doesn't seem finished to me and I'd love it if you did actually take the time to give it an ending.
Either way, I really enjoyed it. This story got me into Peter Pan slash. I love it. Either way, hope to get more like this from you in the future.
Either way, I really enjoyed it. This story got me into Peter Pan slash. I love it. Either way, hope to get more like this from you in the future.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINSIH STORY!!!!!!
it's my favorite!
it's my favorite!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite fic please finish it!
(i know this ideas stupid but..)
what if the fairy peter let go found him all broken in the forest and flew to hook for help
(i know this ideas stupid but..)
what if the fairy peter let go found him all broken in the forest and flew to hook for help
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! IT'S MY FAVORITE STORY ON THIS SITE! hook could find
peter in the woods or somthing uncontious and all banged up or hook finds him in his tree
house sleeping (drools) W/E YOU DO JUST FINISH PLEASE!!!!!!! :):):)
peter in the woods or somthing uncontious and all banged up or hook finds him in his tree
house sleeping (drools) W/E YOU DO JUST FINISH PLEASE!!!!!!! :):):)
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*begs for story to be finished*
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Appallingly non-OOC and deliciously evil I hope you continue it.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I love the way you write, a lot of attention to detail. Please, please, PLEASE update SOON! (did you notice the emphisis on SOON!)
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I read your story again, I realized that there is now a tiny mistake in the timeline because of the new first chapter. You have written in the third chapter:
"They would never forget how in the first few days of his captivity, Peter, all tied up, still gave Starkey a black eye and almost bit clean through the hand when the latter sneaked into Hook's cabin for an extra session of pleasure."
Well, this can't be right now, because in the first days of his captivity Peter was still in the brig and free to use for everyone.
By the way, I hope the story isn't finished yet. It is definitly my favourite PP FF.
"They would never forget how in the first few days of his captivity, Peter, all tied up, still gave Starkey a black eye and almost bit clean through the hand when the latter sneaked into Hook's cabin for an extra session of pleasure."
Well, this can't be right now, because in the first days of his captivity Peter was still in the brig and free to use for everyone.
By the way, I hope the story isn't finished yet. It is definitly my favourite PP FF.