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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this isnt the end, is it?? there will be another chapter, yeah?
because i want Hook to realise how much he likes peter, as a companion...
XxX
because i want Hook to realise how much he likes peter, as a companion...
XxX
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very involved story line! Some sections of it really tested my nerves, I must admit. I wonder that you adopt such a neutral tone sometimes for the horrible happenings. I do like your characterizations, but I am genuinely afraid of waht this is all leading up to.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually reviewing. And something with more than one chapter. AND slash: :-D
It's a really good story, actually. Poor Peter, I guess... I never seem to feel too sorry for him though. I like Hook. I always do like your Hook, and he is quite interesting here. I do wonder if it will be a happy ending. Or was this the last chapter? I hope not.
It's a really good story, actually. Poor Peter, I guess... I never seem to feel too sorry for him though. I like Hook. I always do like your Hook, and he is quite interesting here. I do wonder if it will be a happy ending. Or was this the last chapter? I hope not.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh drat! They seemed to be getting on well for a while... I'm just hoping this isn't the endightight? It just can't be. Peter Pan was a hard one to tame, but hopefully one mistake can't blow all that nice treatment Hook lavished on him permanently... he'd realize he wants to come back to Hook, right?
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No No No!!!
It wasn't supposed to happen this way!!!
AHHG!
Please say it'll get better?!
Poor Hook! He can't help himself.
Lovely chappies!
It wasn't supposed to happen this way!!!
AHHG!
Please say it'll get better?!
Poor Hook! He can't help himself.
Lovely chappies!
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
Please keep updating, I'd be very put-off if
you ever abandoned it!
You have such wonderful writing, truly. The spelling and grammar
is superior and refreshing...
and the whole idea is hot.
o_o
PLEASE UPDATE!
Please keep updating, I'd be very put-off if
you ever abandoned it!
You have such wonderful writing, truly. The spelling and grammar
is superior and refreshing...
and the whole idea is hot.
o_o
PLEASE UPDATE!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing story, I'm waiting for the next part with bated breath. Thank you.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg can i just say i love this fic? and i also like the clever titles, like, 'dogged hunger' appears twice in that chapter (the croc AND peter), and it's also got the symbolism of hook's hunger for pan and all that. and same with 'fairies are the perfect size'. that's so cool. is it wrong that i sort of feel bad for hook? his love is so doomed. PLEASE UPDATE THIS ONE!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated this fic! Its great, and I cant wait to read more.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This is absolutely heart wrenching! I hope that you can get another chapter up! Its so sad and wonderfully written! I love your writing!