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schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue. i wanna see what's next
person Amber
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh write more, i loved it!!!! it was wonderfully written, i need to know what happens!!
person Jade
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your brilliant. Well done!!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like your alternate ending! I'm pretty sure it's the only alt ending for LotF I've ever read where someone had the guts to kill off Ralph. I like how the question is posed at the end. Who DOES win? It's really lovely, leaves it open to much interpretation. And the whole idea of the rescue just being a vision since Ralph is going slightly mad is great. Nice work.
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