rate_review Reviews

This is a great story. I love that sense of humor in your writing. You just need to edit/proofread. The last chapter looks like it belongs to another story, an Inuyasha fanfic. Mixed up? Lol.

What's with the sixth chapter?! I was looking forward to the rest of this!
The story so-far is awesome with all the cool references to religion and the coming back from the dead and stuff.
Please write more!
Jackaniny

Please hurry up and put in the right chapter! The rest was great.

There is something wrong, PLEASE! fix it. This is perfectly good, and then you change the story. WHY?

Um. What the hell? A sexy scene with Tobias and Rachel and the next its Kagome and the mutt? Okay... Big ol' error right there homie.

I don't know how long ago you wrote this, but I really hope you get back to it! I've been peddling it off to my friends mercilessly in the hour it took me to read it. I love the storyline; please finish it.

And what's with the Inuyasha thing at the end?

haha thats great

This story is pretty wild. I'm glad its not one of those fics where its sex, non stop. Its irritating reading stuff like that. Its like whats the point when there is porn??? Anyway..i thought the sex scene would have been more intimite but i knew right off it'd be like that cause ur style is on the wildside. A lot of cursing though..it fits in at certain places but its just making this story seem downright barbaric. REally good story, even though..i might even steal it ..revise it to be more sweeter and post it it fanfiction.net. ....just kidding ! if i do ill ask. im serious by the way.

Very good writing! You could do Marco falling for Jordan, since Jordan is very obviously n win with him, and Jordan should acquire something, too. She doesn't have many morphs, does she? Tobias would need some morphs, too.

not bad, make more, include jordan in there with someone, maybe even rachel...but, I mean it, it's a very good story, yopu nee3d to write more