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for Afterwards

by ThePhantomSockPuppet

person Aubrey
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How sad that you never finished this..
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it's written very well so far. I agree with you though, I wish there were more fans of L.J. Smith, she's awesome. I really love the books of the Forbidden Game, Julian was hot!! I wanted to name my future son Julian but my husband said no :( Oh well, please update! I've always wanted L.J. Smith to come out with a sequel to Forbidden Game.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, gonna update?
person belixz
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease keep it going iv been dieing for a good fg fic its killing its wicked so far hun .
see u soon
b
person Korrigan
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god thank you for writing this I too love L.J Smith and searched all over for the forbidden game fanfic but zilch,zip,nada!I'm reading this just so you know and love it!julian?damn!damn!damn!(HOT)
person Wolfariusorca
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish there was more fanfiction too! Thanks for writing one ^_^ I love julian, he should so save her in this story. XD
person BRP
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Friends came, and friends went, and it hurt Jenny every time."

I get how Jenny feels.
person BRP
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The sun (shined) golden through the blinds in Jenny’s kitchen" and "isit" sound improper. Please fix them, if u like.

Interesting story. I get how Jenny feels. Look forward to reading more.

person BRP
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I was a teenager, at first, I had trouble dating. I read LJ Smith's books like Forbidden Game Trilogy. I fell in love with Julian. Along with other guys, imaginary and real.

Julian...is...bloody...hot.

person LV
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

Please write more. I really want to know where you're going.

I love L.J. Smith's Forbidden Game series too. It's one of my favourites. Her Dark Visions one is quite nice as well but I'm touch and go on the rest of her books. So far, this is well written.

Julian's death... well, it shattered me as is when you're involved in a book you really like. You care for the characters. And his "death" was painful. I've always felt Julian should be the one Jenny ends up with. Not Tom. Tom never loved her like Julian did and she... all she felt was tenderness for Tom. There was no passion and love. No racing heart, no breathlessness. No dying for the next touch. That's not consummate love. What she had with Julian was. Like I said, I was highly disappointed with this ending. So, please, write more.

- LV
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