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by ThePhantomSockPuppet

person Night
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!! please update soon.
~Nightra
person Lilium Noir
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, you're a good writer. Which is rare here I've learned >D To answer your question, there was some sort of family-related tragedy when LJ Smith was writing the last Night World book and she never finished it. As far as I know she's stopped writing.
person Celric Celia
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...I see that this story hasn't been updated in awhile...but I do wish you would continue it. The Forbidden Game trilogy is one of my all-time favorite reads...and I think this fanfic has great potential. Keep it up! :)
person ehu
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this series! i hope that you do continue it. i used to wonder what would have happened if jenny and julian actually got together. i even wanted him to win and get jenny all to himself! lol but yes, please continue!
person Soph
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap I loved those three books when I was 13. Anyhow, I really like the dullard suburbanite spin you gave to the story and how empty it feels to Jenny. It works well with the original storyline, so I think you should keep to it!

Soph
person ElizabethBathory83
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I don't know the last time you updated, but I wish it continued! I agree with you...when I was a teenager, L.J. Smith was wonderful! What ever happened to her?
person TnN
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is really nice. I'd like longer chapters, of course, but it's still nice. I like the way you've described that they've all moved on. I'm looking forward to the Julian/Jenny parts as well, but I'd rather that you take your time. This is unfolding nicely... hooray for plot!
person Laura
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far, yve gve got a good start. I was hoping there would be more than just two chapters... get back to writing!
person Rain
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're kind of bouncing in this story. I'm not finding a point and it's already 2 chaps in. Please make there be something interesting in the 3rd chappy and make it longer than a paragraph. THe summary seemed great but after reading those two 'chapters' I'm bored.
person Elwyn
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!! I see you haven't updated in a few months, i hope this hasn't been abandoned. The Vampire Diaries have always been my favorite.. but you have a good continuation going here. Can't wait to see Julian!!
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