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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see a well written sequel to the forbidden game trilogy. The premise is interesting too, I'd really like to see more. Please keep writing!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two LJS fanfics here, so of course I'm going to read them both. I like it so far. If you like LJS fanfiction check out TTales if you havent allready. www.ttales.net I think. Or you can just do a search for twilight tales. This reminds me a little of every other FG fic out there, but there really are only two ways you can go with the story line. Bring Julian back or leave him dead. Which one will you be trying? I like the twist you give it, phycologicaly. Sorry, cant spell. And I love the thought of Dee in Nigeria. I want to see more!!!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your fanfic. It was really well writen. When will you write more? I'd like to see where this story is going. I liked the relationships between the characters and the forshadowing. I hope that we see more of Julian...
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this very much. a little on the short side, but the writing is very good. please update soon! i wanna see how Julian comes into the story! ^_^
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you should keep writing this, I was so happy to see a Forbidden Game fanfiction. Don't stop, please!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean about L.J. I loved the Forbidden Game trilogy, and many other of her titles as a teenager. She is a truly gifted author. I'm finding your fic very interesting so far and hope that you continue. Although the chapters were short, they were very intriguing and your writing flows beautifully. It was sad to see that the whole gang wasn't together anymore but separation is a fact of life. Great job. Please coue! ue!