rate_review Reviews

What a very cute story. And, even though I've never routed for Edward and Anita, and the time this story is placed, I could see a relationship developing between the two. Seems to move a bit to fast at times, but I understand the need to get it out. Also, I am anxious to see what will happen when Richard and Jean-Claude catch up with Edward and Anita. Keep up the good work, and do not let your readers wait to long.

I just finished reading your story and think that it is very good. I can't wait untill the next chapter comes out keep up the good work.

Wow Death a virgin so hard to comperhend... *shrugs* anyways I love your story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.

that was great please more more i would love to read more please update soooooooooooooooooooooon in till then later

angel

This chappy was good, I was going to read this story before, but I just couldn't get on the internet. It was good! The characters are almost like in the books, that's a compliment, since I really think that no one other than Lauren can really make Anita come to life. But I really did hate the soft Edward. I mean, he's Death, no mushy. Well, I guess everybody has their own ideas and tates. But I sooo truly agree with you on Richard. He's just so stupid, making everybody feel bad because of the way he acts. So imature and stupid. If he doesn't like what he is, he can just deal with it himself or go to therapy. He doesn't have to go around making Anita feel like shit. By the way, Nathaniel is not that of a wimp! He's mature and stuff in Narcissus in Chains and then in Cerulean Sins and then in Incubus Dreams he's just so fucking good. Literally, Anita can vouch to that. So, I just wanted to say your story is good, cool, and get your but of the couch and start writing! I love it.

I've never before cared for the idea of Edward and Anita as a couple. However, you did such a great job and gave them the type of relationship I could imagine them having. And you did it with such detail. They were friends first and foremost. Thanks

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!!!! i'M TRYING TO BE PATIENT, BUT I'M NOT A PATIENT PERSON...SO I WILL SIMPLY HAVE TO LOWER MYSELF TO BEGGING, O.K. OH....
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UPDATE SOON!

Hello! I just wanted to say that I have read all of your chapters so far and I think that are amazing! I really like how you didn't jump into them getting their nooky on. It was great how you worked your way up to that point. What really stuck out to me was how little things Anita and Edward did together kinda chipped away at Edward until he did open up and it wasn't full of mystery. He seemed to be like a normal person, not just death. I think you've done a great job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter. You play all of the characters so well...wonderful! Keep creating ~_*!

I really enjoyed this story, even though I have not read any of the books that possibly go with this SL of yours. But it was interesting and I hope you add more soon.

-cata

When are you going to update? I wanna know what happens when the others find out about Edward and Anita.......... PLeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeee update soon.