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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! GO EDWARD!!!!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I never would have tagged Death as a virgin, but I guess you never can tell, can you? I think that the vulnerability that you have given Edward's character is great. It makes him much more human and a better match for Anita. The scene was sweet, hot, and heres hoping that he at the very least gets to injure Richard when they finally meet. Mathatthat will snap Richard out of his moodiness. At least it would give him something real to complain about. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You have captured Anita's voice perfectly and the budding relationship between her and Edward is wonderful. Hopefully, things will start to heat up soon. Also, I have to congratulate you on capturing the whining wretch that is Richard(Am I the only one that he is really starting to annoy?) Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What's going on with the next chapter? I'm getting all anxious to see what happens with Edward and Anita. :D Hope your able to finish it soon, good luck!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah yes this is a nice story I a big fan of LKH there not that much fanfi'cs out there though so I'm glad to have fond this story
please up date soon
Kittery
please up date soon
Kittery
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I LOVE IT. You have to post the next chapter as soon as possible. I can't wait.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I may have made a new friend.
First off, I've been to Sleeping Bear Dunes since I was 6. My family and I go there every summer to camp. I love climbing the dunes. The first time I did, it took me forever to climb that first dune. I kept slipping and sliding to the bottom.
Secondly, GO EDWARD!! That's what I'm talking about. Some long awaited passion between Anita and Edward has finally been satisfied. This is such a great story. Now, if only you would finish....... I'm on the edge of my seat with aniticaption.
First off, I've been to Sleeping Bear Dunes since I was 6. My family and I go there every summer to camp. I love climbing the dunes. The first time I did, it took me forever to climb that first dune. I kept slipping and sliding to the bottom.
Secondly, GO EDWARD!! That's what I'm talking about. Some long awaited passion between Anita and Edward has finally been satisfied. This is such a great story. Now, if only you would finish....... I'm on the edge of my seat with aniticaption.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story. I assumed they would light up the bridge, just for flight safety, if nothing else.
I hope you update soon, so I can read, what happens next, to see how far Edward and Anita goes.
I hope you update soon, so I can read, what happens next, to see how far Edward and Anita goes.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till the next chapter, Im hanging on the edge of my seat. lol I like your writting style! Will be back to check each chapter.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens next, between Edward and Anita, and see what happens, when the rest catch up with Anita.