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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Beautifully written i can tell you're a great writer! I actually haven't seen when you wrote it but i hope you got more good reviews because you deserve it. It's so weird imagining Peter and Wendy like this lol but your writing style and skills made it pretty clear to my mind! Keep it up and good luck!;)
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In my whole life, i have only read one or two better fanfictons. Congratulations!! You have qritten a masterpiece!! The only thing. You could have done a better last lemon, it was just too fast and simple. Whoever liked this piece of writing should read “you belong with me” a flamexember fanfiction on fanfiction.net in spyro the dragon fanfics. That, is the best thing ive ever read!! And as to you, the author of this piece, keep going, cause you are on the right track!!
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read this story years ago and still looked for it again recently! Loved it! <3
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know that this story has been completed for a while, but I'm glad that I found it. I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the writing and I really liked the pacing of the story. Overall, this is one of my absolute favorites. I wish that you had more that I could read, but alas, you do not. I really enjoyed Peter's point of view. The innocence that you imbued in his parts was so true to his character. Thank you for the excellent read and I hope the you write more!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm only up to chapter 8 and I can sum it up in two words: brilliant writing. I've been a fan of peter pan for as long as I can remember. As a kid I used to watch my old VHS tape of the Mary Martin play and the disney film, as well as the film Hook. It wasn't until after the 2003 film and I read the novel twice that I began to wonder what might happen if Peter actually tried to continue a relationship with Wendy. With that in mind this story hasn't disappointed me. The way it builds up kept me hooked, and the way the inner workings of the characters is describes makes it seem as if Barry himself wrote it.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my heart is still a flutter from chapther 7. beating steadily yet faster beneath my chest. in a word,
Awesomeness.....
Note: why fanfic fans don't write reviews enough- When the story is exceptional (like yours)our hunger for the next chapter is so strong that we don't take time to write reviews in between. when we finally finish a great story, we're spent. and instead of finally writing the great review you deserve, we go outside and have a cigarette.
Our bad... ;)
Awesomeness.....
Note: why fanfic fans don't write reviews enough- When the story is exceptional (like yours)our hunger for the next chapter is so strong that we don't take time to write reviews in between. when we finally finish a great story, we're spent. and instead of finally writing the great review you deserve, we go outside and have a cigarette.
Our bad... ;)
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Note: This is my first review ever and I may not be doing it right*
Where do I start? This story was absolutely fantastic! Although not what you would call "smutty" by any means, it is a gentle and incredibly sweet, well written tale. The author's respect for the original story and for the characters themselves made every word of this a wonderful read. I laughed and I also cried a little bit, but mostly I just appreciated how well done it was. The unique point of view of total inexperience was what made this story so touching. If I could have had any choice of ending for the original book, it would be this one (not for children, of course, just for me) It appeals to the romantic in me, as well as the grown-up who may not have actually grown up completely. To the author I say, what an incredible experience you have led me through. I thank you for sharing this with me.
Where do I start? This story was absolutely fantastic! Although not what you would call "smutty" by any means, it is a gentle and incredibly sweet, well written tale. The author's respect for the original story and for the characters themselves made every word of this a wonderful read. I laughed and I also cried a little bit, but mostly I just appreciated how well done it was. The unique point of view of total inexperience was what made this story so touching. If I could have had any choice of ending for the original book, it would be this one (not for children, of course, just for me) It appeals to the romantic in me, as well as the grown-up who may not have actually grown up completely. To the author I say, what an incredible experience you have led me through. I thank you for sharing this with me.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story here. You are a very talented lady.
Thank you for this beyond worthy effort. :)
Thank you for this beyond worthy effort. :)
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey just finished your fic and i thought it was really really good!! not having it filled with smut and with a really sweet and believable (ish) plot made it all the better to read! great work!!
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was wonderfully refreshing. Especially after all the Hook/Pan I've been seeing. This was more than smut, it really was a story! Not to mention you had me in stitches at Peter's attempt at being a proper "husband".
My only suggestion you be you need to go back in there and fix some errors, there were a few places where words seemed missing, but I got through it. I will greatly enjoy reading this story again, and please keep writing, you have a great flare that really bring the characters to life.
My only suggestion you be you need to go back in there and fix some errors, there were a few places where words seemed missing, but I got through it. I will greatly enjoy reading this story again, and please keep writing, you have a great flare that really bring the characters to life.