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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't find a better word to express what I think of your story. It was true to the characters, no bull-shitting cliched scenes, great dialogue. Wow.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I love this. Your protrail of how unlearned they two of them are is so magnificently writen. I love the way Peter has no clue, and Wendy only a sligt glimer.
It is such a relife to read a story that give a situation that alows the chareters to truly experiance the reality of the dawn of their sexuality.
I only thing I wanted was a bit more of what the fiaries and mermaids spoke about but the story is not lacking becuse of it, so never worry about my sicuricuriosity.
You have a great gift at weaving a tale never doubt that.
'Orion
It is such a relife to read a story that give a situation that alows the chareters to truly experiance the reality of the dawn of their sexuality.
I only thing I wanted was a bit more of what the fiaries and mermaids spoke about but the story is not lacking becuse of it, so never worry about my sicuricuriosity.
You have a great gift at weaving a tale never doubt that.
'Orion
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^.^= <(* *<)(>* *)><(* *<)(>* *)>
I do beleave that is bestbest thing i have read in a very long time!!!!!!!!!!!
I sent u a email so look for it. Grade A+++++ fanfiction
I do beleave that is bestbest thing i have read in a very long time!!!!!!!!!!!
I sent u a email so look for it. Grade A+++++ fanfiction
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have to say that the ending brought tears to my eyes. This is most definitely the best story on this entire site. It was beautiful. I read it all in one sitting, it was just goo good. I've been looking for this exact kind of storyline for years, and you were the only person who could pull it off. It has every emotion I've always wanted to read in it. I'll always remember this as one of my absolutvorivorite fanfics. THANK YOU so much. And please, continue in your writing, because you are a fabulous author.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely amazing!! Unbelieveable! I loved every second of it, and you had me squealing and freaking out the whole time This has got to be one of the best PP fics Ive ever read!! Great job!
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, uh... I never review anything.
But, for some crazy reason, he am. am. Probably because your writing is absolutely amazing. Every moment it was so real, and so... wonderful. If writing can make you feel loved, then this is it. A standing ovation for spectacular characterization, beautiful descriptions and a true peek into innocence.
Good job. I am enlightened--and very happy.
But, for some crazy reason, he am. am. Probably because your writing is absolutely amazing. Every moment it was so real, and so... wonderful. If writing can make you feel loved, then this is it. A standing ovation for spectacular characterization, beautiful descriptions and a true peek into innocence.
Good job. I am enlightened--and very happy.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story! I recently just saw Peter Pan and decided to visit the site to see if anyone had any stories and I think you did a great job. I don't like reading smutty stuff, but the kind where the characters actually fall in love and move slowly. "Awakening" was a great story and I totally loved it!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...honestly, I didn't think I'd lthisthis fic when I first started reading it, but I quickly changed my mind. Somehow, you kept them both in character, and even though it deals with adult issues, there are certain parts which makes you see that they are still childlike (in their minds, of course). Peter's ignorance at certain things almost made me want to go 'awwww!' at certain places in the story. Anyway, since you said yove rve reviews (and I completely understand that) I thought I'd drop one for you. Great job!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. I'm loving the whole "first time" stuff. Romance with smut is always the best. :)
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! That was one of the sweetest fics I have ever read. You must wrtie more! Please email me if you do. I would love you you to continue this story. :)