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Oh, what a lovely story! I had read your Secret Garden story and then forgotten about this one, until suddenly I was reading something about Peter Pan and returned to your author's page to read your story. It was romantic, and sweet, and erotic, and perfect. Thank you.

the story was fantastic! i really enjoyed reading and i hope to read some of your other work soon

Hello!. ^^ Your story was the best I've ever read. Other people just can't write them good.They write horribly and childishly. You have this.. special touch. I dunno what you did, but your fic is more than a 10-out-of-10. If I could, id give it a 100!! I loved your fic!!!! ^_____________________^ Keep it up!

Thank you very much for making such a wonderful story of Peter and Wendy. It was simply beautiful.

Hey! I don't know if you're still taking reviews for this fic, but I just wanted to tell you I absolutely adored it. You mentioned in the beginning that you wanted to keep the innocence to it while still exploring the more smutty side and I think you did a perfect job of that. I'd be interested to see more of your work. Your style is elegant, I'd be hard pressed to find any errors gramatically or cannonly (assuming there even are any because I didn't see a one), and the whole fic just pulled me in right from the beginning. Your characterization was perfect and the tone was just sweet and amazing, I liked that you were able to keep the same tone throughout fic.fic. So many authors change tones as they change moods. You didn't. It was absolutely a most beautiful fic. Thanks for the great read!

wow, that was such an enjoyable story! So intelligently and beautifully written...unlike most of the fan fiction I've read, I can actually believe that this might have happened after the events of the movie/book. I just watched the film for the first time tonight and immediately had to jump on the internet to see if anyone had written any decent fan fiction on it. Thank you so much for this stReb

I LOVE this story. Please add more. PLEEAASSEE!! It is awesome and realisatic (Peter Pan wise)

I can´t think of any other way to describe this story but beautiful. I loved the way you used Peter's innocence and the little knowledge Wendy had show how 2 young beings discovered their own sexuality and the joy in it ;)

well, you've had over 3000 hits, a five-star rating, and several reviwes, i'm sure, compared to the chapter 7 numbers =) Peter Pan is one of my most favorite movies, and i found this story a complete *joy* to read. you know how to write, you can do plot with smut (and even romance!), and your characterazation is amazing. i don't think anyone else could have captured Peter and Wendy like you did. i hope you keep up the marvelous work! you are truly and inspiration.

That was the most beautiful story. I have never read anything like it and I must say I don't think I ever will again, unless, of course, it is in a fairy tale. I cried and laughed and blushed along with the characters. You have an amazing talent. I don't think I could ever do this tory justice if I were to explain its wonderfulness to my friends. The innocence and curiosity you had both Wendy and Peter Pan keep made this story that much more believable and beautiful. I hope you continue to write other stories and share your gift.