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Damn girl, that is one freakin' awesome story. I have read a lot of fan fiction in my day but few compare to that caliber of writing. Keep writing fan fiction girly, because you have a gift for it. Your story was smutty, yet very well written and realistic (a rare combination to find here) and I thorougly enjoyed reading it. Your descriptions of their hair color, people, and the environment of each scene was magnificant. As a writer myself, I am very picky with with the stories I read and don't read, and yours was unbelievable. Keep up the good work girl and I hope to read some more stories of yours some time soon. If you write anymore, email them to me okay? If you want, whenever I write some fan fiction, I can send it to you, if you are interested in reading it. Mutual admiration society- j/k! Talk to you later chica. Excellent jKeepKeep up the excellent writing.

-Dela

That was a bautifully written fic; I'm so amazed! While I loved the move, I was higly unsatisfied with the ending. (Albeit not as unsatisfied as when I read the book...) I have been scouring ff.net and it has been overall... disappointing. Now that I've read this, I will continue to search ff.net with renewed vigor!

yay! well done, it's rather like a fairytale with smut for grownups. grin.

"Wasn't it terribly inconvenient? Did things get lost in there?" I've got tears in my eyes over that one. Your story thus far (chapter 8, I couldn't wait until the end to review) has been the most entertaining, most well-written, and sweetest fic I have come across in this particular fandom. It's hao fio find Peter/Wendy at all. Quite original too, and the writing style is perfectly in line with the storyteller feel of the book. Marvelous job!

AMAZING. this is by far one of my favorite fics. you are one hell of a writer, you know that? you've got quite a talent and i admire you for it. :) keep it up.


xo;Alicia

This story is crying for a sequel. Or maybe you can write more PP/WD adventures in NeverLand. ;P

All alone
under the trees of the forest, I dance
with my hands outstretched. Look!
A dream that sways in the sunlight filtering through trees.
The winds of myth blow,
touching my hair and fingers.
Even in sadness, even in pain,
as I travel to distant countries
that shine with the light of the sun,
the sun watches over me.
Why is it
that unsehinghings are so fascinating?
An unknown place...
A dream is calling me...
It's warm in bare feet.
The seeds are awakening too.
Weak life, strong feelings.
Even the birds know.
Whenever I just sing,
it seems to reach to the sky.
The clouds reflected
on the water's shimmering surface
are wings on my back.
Wearing only
the fragrance of flowers,
I set out.
Even in sadness, even in pain,
as I travel to distant countries
that shine with the l of of the sun,
the sun watches over me.
I thought that these lyrics fit The whole story of Peter Pan quite well. I listened to this song on repeat while I was reading your story. It is actually in japanese, so really I had no idea what it ment until I looked up the lyrics. It kinda surprised me.

I read this fic shortly after I saw the new Perter Pan movie. I have always loved the book since I was a little girl. Yet I have always hated the ending. The story you have told is the ending I think that it should have always had. I usually don't really care if the leading male and female roles of movies and books end up " together " but I have always thought that Wendy and Perter just belong together. But I didn't want for them to go and live in London and grow old. That would make me nearly as mad as them just going their seperte ways as they did. You have written a wonderful story, your lack of idealization just makes the story better. You are very talented, I hope that anything else of yours that I read is every bit as good as this one. ^.^ I will be sure to reckmend this here tale ta me freinas. I am sure they will love it as much as I.

great job on this fic i absolutely love peter pan and wendy sts. is. i love how they ended up together. Peter Pan and Wendy are a great love couple. you should continue writing more stories about them because your stories are fantastic!

Yay! I have been looking for a good Peter Pan fanfiction all day and I finally found one! Thak you for writing such a wonderful fanfiction, I think I'll go see what else you have.

-Gatoion