rate_review Reviews

I just had a thought. Immagine Peter's reaction to Wendy having a baby?!

That really was a beautiful fic. *sigh!* My eyes are shining like a strange anime character (if you know what I mean). Beautifully written. Big thumbs up!

This is beautifully written and I have enjoyed every chapter! You are truly talented!

I loved your story! It was so nice to see a Peter Pan fic that wasn't a Hook/Pan! I would love to read more of your work :)

oh my god! that is by far the best story i have ever read!!! You should like write a sequel or something, or another story i dunno but you are an amazing writer. Believe me i have read plenty of stories and this by far is the best story i have ever read in my entire life! Amazing job!

Hey i just wanted to say that your story was so well done! and was not overly gross or repulsive. i hope you keep writing and do another one. very well done!

this ending is so much better than the movies, bravo *gives a pat on the back*

Well, I have got to hand it to you, you write a very good story. It took me a night and day to read it since I orginally started to read it a few hours before having to go into work and came right back to it once I got home from work. The y way was way more important to finish reading then heading right to bed after a long night of work. Your portrayal of Peter and Wendy was excellant, and the story itself was absolutely great! I hope to reare sre stuff from you concerning these two. I just watched the movie for the first time (I originally bought the DVD for my son and ended up watching it myself) and decided after the movie was over with to see what sort of stories were out there about those two. Your story was an excellant surprise...I just can't seem to say enough how good it is!

Ice Cat

Just reread it today and have to say I loved the sweet part where Wendy talks about virginity and Peter hopes she will go first so he can copy her. That is exactly like Peter Pan. You have stayed so absolutely true to the characters it's like you're channeling Barrie! :) Bravo, well done. I had to read those lines three times because I just loved the way you wrote it. So cute, so *Peter* to think such a thing, to ask why he'd want a virginity if he already has one. LOL Comedic yet not at the same time.

Great story! I love the way you write the characters, they're both realistic and true to the character. I haven't finished the story yet, but I hope it has a happy ending. I've always thought that Peter and Wendy should be together. Hopeless romantic, but especially in the movie... Anyways, great fic!