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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, im really liking this story! im not sureyou you meant to, but I loved the way that you used the traditional voice of the Peter Pan story. Great job.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly beautiful! So you can imagine my frustration when AFF net suddenly went down for some reason at the 8th chapter. I actually had been avoiding the Peter Pan section since the 3 stories that were here were all ped/rape. Never saw the movie, this has always been a book to me. lovely job.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww! I love it!
I've only read the first three chapters...so far. I feel a little weird about it-it's Peter Pan and Wendy, man-but hey, I like it anyway. Maybe I should just imagine Jeremy Sumpter and Raquel watsername instead :D
I've only read the first three chapters...so far. I feel a little weird about it-it's Peter Pan and Wendy, man-but hey, I like it anyway. Maybe I should just imagine Jeremy Sumpter and Raquel watsername instead :D
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're a superb writer--which is no surprise, as you're professional. :) This is an excellent, excellent fic, and I'm glad that there are writers like you in the fanfiction world. Your character and plot development, the concepts, and your fantastic and apt writing style put together this wonderful piece. Well done! :)
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it you remind me of someone who writes in the sailor moon section you see you both are so good at describing things i think you captured the essence of peter pan perfectly in stead of turning them into porn stars you had them act out the fanfic the way the characters would have done it. I look forward to reading future fics from you
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! i know i havent reviewed, cos, well, i've never reviewed on this site before. but the ending to that was absolutely perfect. about the children/adult thing... awwww. to be totally honest, it made me cry. and im not one who cries easily. it was just so perfect. i read this story in one day, and i loved it all. very very well writtall all the descriptive words, no typos, nothing out fo context or that doesnt fit. it all flowed just beautifully. congratulations. story very well written.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Remarkable! “Awakenings” is well-written, just the right mix of drama and smueeheeehee). And I especially love Peter…the way you write him, I mean. The way you described his innocence, and his struggle to come to terms with his sexuality…well gee…it’s pretty damn HOT!
And I adoow yow you paint a vivid scene with your words. This line here: “The grass was tall around them, neaas tas tall as Wendy's shoulder, and sown liberally with creeping wild roses that permeated the salty air with their own musky sweet scent.”… I just love that. I could practically imagine the scent of the air Peter and Wendy were inhaling at that particular moment!
I love that this fic wasn’t purely smut, the sex became so magical and beautiful because you had Peter and Wendy holding out (and us readers waiting) for so long. (*grin*) Of course since I’m shamelessly a fanthe the PWP, the fic could have been complete smut and I would still love it just cause you’re so good! (*coughmoresmutcough*)
Reading your fic was so enjoyable, it brought me to this really introspective yet giddy state that I felt when I first read “Memoirs of a Geisha” by Arthur Golden. ^_guesguess that’s my way of saying I admire you, and I hope you write more Peter/Wendy fics. Sorry for the epic review. ^_^
Email me! :)
mintmocha
dracomalfoyismyraunchpuppet@yahoo.com
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=4537
And I adoow yow you paint a vivid scene with your words. This line here: “The grass was tall around them, neaas tas tall as Wendy's shoulder, and sown liberally with creeping wild roses that permeated the salty air with their own musky sweet scent.”… I just love that. I could practically imagine the scent of the air Peter and Wendy were inhaling at that particular moment!
I love that this fic wasn’t purely smut, the sex became so magical and beautiful because you had Peter and Wendy holding out (and us readers waiting) for so long. (*grin*) Of course since I’m shamelessly a fanthe the PWP, the fic could have been complete smut and I would still love it just cause you’re so good! (*coughmoresmutcough*)
Reading your fic was so enjoyable, it brought me to this really introspective yet giddy state that I felt when I first read “Memoirs of a Geisha” by Arthur Golden. ^_guesguess that’s my way of saying I admire you, and I hope you write more Peter/Wendy fics. Sorry for the epic review. ^_^
Email me! :)
mintmocha
dracomalfoyismyraunchpuppet@yahoo.com
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=4537
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say hello and I'm sorry I have not written you yet - just wanted to say also that I agree with what others have said about a sequel. Of course, I know how long it takes to write these, so I understand if you'ro buo busy. I will get you that review, Ijust need to go through the story again to pick out my favorite bits. If you have an updates list, please add me.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much! If I asked you to do a sequel, would you? I think I'd just melt if I got to read about Wendy explaining pregnancy! *laughs with tears in eyes*. Seriously, though, this is a really great fic, and it puts a lot of others to shame. Sorry you don't have a lo rev reviews, but you deserve a million. A Peter Pan fic was never done so well, and thank you for convincing me it could be done.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an adorable story! I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope that you'll continue to write.