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Fantastically written! I was a little wary of reading a Peter Pan story, because I worried that the author wouldn't keep with the innocentness portrayed in the movie. But I found myself to be pleasantly surprised with 'Awakenings'. The Peter of your story was every bit the Peter of the movie. ('Cept that Diswoulwould never put the things Peter and Wendy did in one of their movies. lol)

Loved it!

-Lindsey

It's REALLY late here, almost 2 AM and I've just finished this story. This deserves a very throough review, so I'm going to email it to you tomorrow. I will say that this was absolutely beautifully written, masterful and true to the book. I want to point out all the best parts because I found myself reacting to so many things and one minute I'd be smiling or have a giggle at Peter or nod silently in agreement with Wendy. As you may have noticed, the Peter Pan sections of most fan fic sites are really heavy with slash, so I was ecstatic to find this gem. Imagine my happiness at seeing it was not just a one shot but a whole 11 chapters! I do hope you will consider a sequel with lots more lovely smut. I will write more tomorrow, please put me on your updates list if you have one. I have a story on AFF about the Secret Garden and I'm also in my early 30's and a pro writer/editor so I think we may have more stuff in common. Do you have a live journal by any chance? I'm SO glad to "meet" you and I really loved this story. Now pardon me while i go grab my boyfriend ;P Mena

Ah, what can I say, except...I liked your story and your writing style very much.

OHI don't know if you noticed but all through the film he sent Wendy these looks that were very...knowing.As if he knew everything and as if he was the pro!But all the same there was a deep admiration and possibly love in that look, as well.I think that you have described that look in this fic in an amazing way!It was very romantic and it just totally blew me away.You know that there are some fics, in which they describe only animal sex,but here it was perfectly told.It didn't disgust me at all! You managed to say every detail with lots of feeling and less sexual action,which I really admire in an author. Also,the embarassing moments where Peter didn't know what do to were soo logical! I mean, from where could he know what sex was? But you wrote that superbly as well. It wasn't awkward, but cute!
All in all, I praise your wonderful writing and I can't even begin to understand why there isn't as much as reviews as you deserve!* glares menacingly at all who didn't leave a review* I know how off-putting that is, but I'm very glad that you continued,nonetheless. You go girl!!!

OH MY GOD!I've just seen the film "Peter Pan" and I went totally nuts!It was the best animated movie I've evre seen!The actors played their charachters beautifully, especially Jeremy who was sooo cute!Ahhh
I don't know if you noticed but all through the film he sent Wendy these looks that were very...knowing.As if he knew everything and as if he was the pro!But all the same there was a deep admiration and possibly love in that look, as well.I think that you have described that look in this fic in an amazing way!It was very romantic and it just totally blew me away.You know that there are some fics, in which they describe only animal sex,but here it was perfectly told.It didn't disgust me at all! You managed to say every detail with lots of feeling and less sexual action,which I really admire in an author. Also,the embarassing moments where Peter didn't know what do to were soo logical! I mean, from where could he know what sex was? But you wrote that superbly as well. It wasn't awkward, but cute!
All in all, I praise your wonderful writing and I can't even begin to understand why there isn't as much as reviews as you deserve!* glares menacingly at all who didn't leave a review* I know how off-putting that is, but I'm very glad that you continued,nonetheless. You go girl!!!

Aww crap, that was really cute and sweet. There really isn't much Wendy/Peter stuff of any sort of substance or quality around I reI really liked this. Good job.

Hey!
I've read the WHOLE story and I think it's BRILIANT! Can you ano another new story like it? I loved it how the romance went slow and nothing was rushed 'cause that's how it would have been in the book/movie! Did you know that they might be making a sequel? I can't wait! Bloody fantasic work Kim and I can't wait to read more! Shame on you other people for not replying! How do I add you to my favourites? Can't find the damn button! Cya!
~ Lauren!

wow...just...wow.
this story was fantastic.
absolutly wonderful.

dunno what else to say....i loved it.

^_^

It is good, but I am the type who would like more SEX and ACTION. Keep on writing I like you stories.

Lovely, simply lovely... I adore this... A multi-chapter Wendy x Peter story with a plot, lemon, the protagonists in-character, what more could I ask for? I can't wait to see them satisfy each other's desires...