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wow... that was so great!!

the sex scenes we good, but I am amazed and in awe of how well you write. There is such detail and such... innocence and you've totally captured the characters. I'm simply blown away. You write beautifuly and I hope that you don't stop writing any time soon. Gee wiz, that was really great!! even if there was sex in it I would still have loved it (which is saying something considering this is adult fanfiction and all haha)

amazing, really really great!!

This story was breathtakingly amazing. I salute your well thought out, and extraordinarily well executed plot. The dialogue was beautiful. It will remain with me for a very, VERY long time. =) i loved it.

Wow. That was surprisingly sweet and hot at the same time. I'm glad Peter grew up a bit. The ending was nice, btw.

A surprisingly plausible if not totally accurate summation of consummation. Two thumbs way up for this one. It was both sexy and adorably cute, not to mention completely in tune with the characters and their respective perspectives and ages. you should be very proud of your work in this story.

Hullo there, just to say, i love ur story, uv captured peter exactly like i imagine him to be on the brink of sexual experiance! your writin is fab, love the description and the story. keep it up, will def look out for more of your work! x x x

Just finished reading your story, that was so intense and passionate and believable! I loved it, it was absolutely wicked!!! You truly have a nack of gettin inside a person's feelings. the way u portrayed wendy and peter were so accurate to the movie it was just lovely. well done on managing to write and FINSH a gr8 story! x x x

this was a beautiful story, so very romantic, you captured the esscenct of innocence and love perfectly. ive never read a more wonderful fan fic before.

Oh my, what a beautiful story! You're an amazing writer.

WOW. Awesome! I loved it from begining to end, I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews on this. I would truly LOVE it if you wrote a sequal. Or anything. Great work! Definately one of the best Peter Pan Fanfics ever. Thank you for continuing to write it even without all the encouragement of reviews, many stories are left unfinshed because of that.

Wow, All I can say it wow... Bravo! this was a fasanating story and kept me wanting more and more chatpers as I read, which I havent found a story like this in awhile that I have read!

so I'm actully not even a fan of Wendy's and Peters... I mean they make a good couple :) but I wasnt big fan to actully read fanfics but I just stumbled on here found your story, thought hmmm this might be intresting... so I started reading it... not ONLY was your story very intresting, your whiting style I LOVE (thank you!!!) and I LOVE your decriptions like how it went down to how the kiss tasted like, very nice.... I've read stories (non smut too) where its like.... and they kissed, it was a hot kiss... then they wanted to do it... so they did it... uh uh uh he came.... she felt really stupid for not so uh uh uh... she faked came... the end.... so boring... and LAME? lol... but I love your story!!!! I think its going up in my top 10 list of favoirte stories... and all of them are Anime (Gundam Wing) but now theres a Peter and Wendy... Hmmmm who would have thunk that I would start to like Peter pan fanfics... lol... ANYWAYS....REALLY great story I had so much fun reading it, not every day I read fanfics that are a lot like yours and I have been reading fanfics for probaby 8 years now and it gets harder and harder to find good whiters today. but yes...

have a great night!!!!!

GREAT STORY ONCE AGAIN (even if you wrote it in 04 and now its 06 its always fun to get things from past work huh? :))

take care!
jenny