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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely. So happy to find a Peter/Wendy fic. Always where my heart lay
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In a word, "Exquisite". A good adult fanfiction story is sexy, interesting to read even before the sex scene, and stays true to the characters personalities. A GREAT STORY... causes your heart to flutter in the night, your breath to catch in your throat, and for a brief moment, you actually have an idea of what it would feel like to trully feel desire, yearning , and fullfillment from another human being. Your body and mind are left haunted and aching for more.
This is a GREAT STORY.
THANK YOU.
This is a GREAT STORY.
THANK YOU.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it^^
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was incredibly good. It really was, and I don't often say that. It was rather lucky, then, that my search for Peter Pan fanfics resulted in the finding of yours. I was absolutely entranced by every chapter. Truly excellent writing.
...You might want to fix the various typos found throughout each chapter, though. lol ^_~
...You might want to fix the various typos found throughout each chapter, though. lol ^_~
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was realy good! there should be more wendy/peter fics! hehe, now u have over a hundred reviews, good motivation for a sequal! *wink*wink*
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I usually wait until I actually finish a story to review it, unless it's a WIP, in which case I review from where the riter stopped.
I love this story. Not because of the smut, but because it shows the innocence and naivety of teenagers during puberty, and also in their search for "The one"
I love this story. Not because of the smut, but because it shows the innocence and naivety of teenagers during puberty, and also in their search for "The one"
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good, I had to read it again
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely story. You handled the sexual awakening of innocents with sensitivity and tact, but it was still, to quote the annoying hordes of teen fanfic writers, hawt!
I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story is so good you have tp make a sequel. i mean it i was like all hot and botherd just reading it.