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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Kimberly-A,
I enjoyed your story more than most any other I have read of a similar nature. Your writing style is seemlessly in tune with that of Barrie himself, and I look forward to reading any other stories you have written or plan to write. I also feel you criticize yourself far too much so far as concerning romantic scenes within your story, for a story such as this would not function so pleasingly were it not for the romance. You have managed to make a story based upon the fictional lives of two children, and involve me within it so tightly that I feel nothing inappropriate ensued whatsoever. I am avidly against pedophelia and underage sexual activity you see, and yet this story feels as if it did not enter within those bounds.
So to you, Kimberly, I give you my eternal kudos on a story well written and a job well done.
Sincerely - Austin "Grizz" V.
I enjoyed your story more than most any other I have read of a similar nature. Your writing style is seemlessly in tune with that of Barrie himself, and I look forward to reading any other stories you have written or plan to write. I also feel you criticize yourself far too much so far as concerning romantic scenes within your story, for a story such as this would not function so pleasingly were it not for the romance. You have managed to make a story based upon the fictional lives of two children, and involve me within it so tightly that I feel nothing inappropriate ensued whatsoever. I am avidly against pedophelia and underage sexual activity you see, and yet this story feels as if it did not enter within those bounds.
So to you, Kimberly, I give you my eternal kudos on a story well written and a job well done.
Sincerely - Austin "Grizz" V.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I haven't read a story written this well in a while. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stories from you.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm, can I say friggin AWESOME!!!! thanks for writing a sweet/smutty fic for peter pan!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, stumbled across this, but I must say, it's one of the most endearing "awakening" stories I've ever read. Very sweet, very cute... that two young people at their ages could remain so innocent still is just marvelous.
Truly a joy to read. :)
Truly a joy to read. :)
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!
You write wonderful and I loved the way you tried to make the concept of sex and the lovemaking between two unexperienced teenagers realistic, you hardly find that in Fanfiction nowadays. Though I usually stick with reading Harry Potter Fanfiction, this story really caught my attention, and I am glad that I did give it a chance. I hope to read more of your stories in the future!
PS: I hope you write a Harry Potter Fanfic! :)
You write wonderful and I loved the way you tried to make the concept of sex and the lovemaking between two unexperienced teenagers realistic, you hardly find that in Fanfiction nowadays. Though I usually stick with reading Harry Potter Fanfiction, this story really caught my attention, and I am glad that I did give it a chance. I hope to read more of your stories in the future!
PS: I hope you write a Harry Potter Fanfic! :)
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You are amazing, and wrote this to the letter the way peter would act. Keep writing!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be one of the most well written and erotic stories i have ever seen on this site. i stand in awe of your prowess. ;)
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can think is....Wow. I truly loved your story. It felt so natural that I had to laugh. I remember how confusing it was, too. It was great to read a work that brought out all the feelings and insecurities of that age without overdoing it. I felt like it kept the spirit of the movie while building it up into more, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I just wanted to review it and extend my congratulations on a job well done. It was a wonderful story.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job! i had read this once before and came back to reread it and review! would love to see more of this sort of fic. thanks for the great read and keep up the wonderful work!
kimper :)
kimper :)
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice one!!!!!!!!!!!!! really nice and hot but still little fluffy! great job!! if you ever think of deleting it email it to me i really like it! ^_^ thank you!