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heyy,
I am not sure how long ago this was written, for sheer lack of willingness to click back to find out when it was last updated, but this is one of the best stories I have read on AFF in a long time. I really like the way you molded ignorance and bliss, I have read several stories that have attempted it and they always turn out cheesy. One problem with the story, and I believe that this may be an error from the website but there are several instances where words are cut in half or jumbled in a way that they are hardly readible. I find that the jumbled words are easily deciphered, but they may be something you could fix if you felt they were a problem. Anyway, excellent work.

Brit

PS: Have you ever considered publishing an original work? Several authors posted on AFF, as of late, have attempted to. I think you have a good chance if not better than most at getting some of yours published. :p

I adored this story. A friend of mine introduced me to it and I had such fun reading it. I think you did a wonderful job keeping Peter Pan innocent and yet...curious. It was like reading a fairy tale--revisiting a childhood story through grown up eyes. Wow... I am very impressed. There were a few typos, but they looked like download glitches. I truly enjoyed the story and I can't wait to tell my own circle of friends about it! Bravo...

Twilight

Very Well Written! IT was a Pleasure to Read! Keep up the good work :D

This was perfect. There are no other words.

This is a beautiful story. Absolutely beautiful. You managed to balance innocence with passion, while keeping this continuation of the Peter Pan legend believable. So many people just have Peter instantly grow up and have the desires of a man (along with the knowledge of a man) and that simply makes no sense. You have portrayed it realistically and beautifully. Well done. Well done.

This was a story that I enjoyed immensly. I found that the characters were extremely well writen and the descriptions of the places were beautiful. I have not read that many peter pan stories but this one definately stands out amoung the story's that I have read. I really liked how you described Peter having youth in the turn of his ankle, and the something to do with his hair. I dont remember it exactly but I thought that it was really lovely. I also liked when he called her a dummy. It showed that even though his body had matured, he will always be who he really is. Great job! I will try to read more of your work because I enjoyed this one so much! *hands over a chocolate chip cookie*

*sighs* What a wonderful story! It has the most beautiful atmosphere I´ve ever encountered in any story. It nearly made me cry. I wish I could express how it made me feel better, but I can´t. So I just give you standing ovations. Thank you so much for writing this!

That is possibly the best romantic/first-time fic I have ever read. You captured the innocence and ignorance of them both, especially Peter, in an endearingly brilliant way. This piece is just stunning, and I loved it. Thank you for a great read. ^_^

Wow...just...wow. Superb writing, perfect characterization, excellent story structure, wonderful sense of timing--I don't think I've ever read an adult story as good as this, and I'm quite certain many of the general audience stories I've read aren't as good as this either. I love stories that don't rush to conclusions ^_~ and that give really good characterization, as well as more realistic expectations. In short, I enjoy reading stories that are romance first, then sex. You accomplished this perfectly--few authors even try, even fewer succeed as you have. Please write more!

yay i loved your fic.....yay to all the fluff....it was so sweet.....good job on your writing ability. yay!