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that was really sweet. It had both a sweet, interesting plot and sex. Something that is hard to find. I enjoyed it very much.

I just read the whole story- and let me tell u... IT'S AESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I truly enjoyed this story. You kept all of the characters so in-character, and captured their innocence quite well. This story was, in a word, beautiful. I enjoyed it far beyond any other PP fic I have ever read. Keep up the good work, and I shall watch for more from you. :)

I loved this story. Very well written.

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ITS MY FAVORTIE... YOU ARE SOOOOOO CLEVER... HOW DID YOU PLAN THIS OUT!!!!?????????... WRITE AWAKENINGS 2 THE CONTINUATION... OR ELSE I WILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! * COUGH COUGH!!!* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... HAHA...HA... ~SILENCE~ *GRUNT...* NO, SERIOUSLY... FINISH IT...FIRST OF ALL... THE CONTINUATION COULD BE LIKE WENDY AND PETER HAVE FIGHT AND SHE RUNS AWAY INTO THE NIGHT... PETER REALIZES WHAT HE DID AND CHASES AFTER HER... WENDY MEETS AN INDIAN BOY AND FINDS SOLACE IN HIS ARMS (DONT TAKE IT THE WRONG WAY, I DONT MEAN SEX...) PETER SPOTS THEM AND THROWS A FIT... NEARLY KILLING THE INDIAN BOY AND THEN GIVES WENDY THE BEST "NIGHT" THEY EVER HAD JUST TO REMIND HER WHO SHE REALLY BELONG TO!!!!!!... AHHHHH HOW ROMANTIC!!!!!!!... * SWEAT DROP* I HAVE THIS ALL PLANNED OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... THANKS AND YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL OR ELSE!!!!!!... ^-^

Wow. This story, even if the subject matter was somewhat racy, was absolutely beautiful. I especially loved the ending, with Peter and Wendy being adults and children at the same time. Thank you for their happy ending.

You've written a fan-fic that is both sweet and sexy. Excellent job. :-)

*applauds enthusiastically* =D Oh, it's almost frustrating, because I can't convey the excitement and overall wow-ness that I feel over this story without bursting into full caps and many many exclamation marks. *explodes.. in so many ways* This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read, and I LOVE the fact that you based it a bit on the movie. I loved that movie.. so very much *giggle-squeal* This story.. it's so.. tangible. I can almost smell the sea air, touch the leaves, walk upon the sturdy floor of their quaint marital home.. And the roses... *sighs all girly like*

I love it. Absolutely love it. Their little bout in the grass gave me a blast in the past back to my first experiences of passion, fear and insecurity. Wow. Ohmygoodness wow. The naive love, the contrast of fact and feeling... wow. This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Wow, and wow some more. Ohmygoodness, I think I love you. o_o WEEEEEEOMYGOSHYAY! ... I had to get that out. :) Okay, I'll stop rambling now...

Conclusion: Wonderful. Beautiful. I love you. :)

Absolutely enthralling! Excellent story! Really makes the transition from childhood to adulthood seem graceful and exciting! A++

Excellent!