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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story so much, It was very well written, and very well planned. Loved the love scenes, and the gradual understanding that peter obtained through investigating, had me excited to know what would happen next through reading it all. Hope you write more like this one because I wouldnt mind reading them, you're a great writer, thank you.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the most beautiful story that I have ever read!!!
Peter Pan is one of my favorite movies..I just wished that they would have made the movie like that (or maybe the sequel?)
Love Jeremy Sumpter!!! So I gotta love the story..
Might there be a sequel where they might have kids?
Lil Peter Pan? LoL
Peter Pan is one of my favorite movies..I just wished that they would have made the movie like that (or maybe the sequel?)
Love Jeremy Sumpter!!! So I gotta love the story..
Might there be a sequel where they might have kids?
Lil Peter Pan? LoL
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story, nicely written, good plot and excellent characterisation
You could do with having a beta looking over it before you post as there are some rather odd spelling mistakes, but overall I thought this was great.
You could do with having a beta looking over it before you post as there are some rather odd spelling mistakes, but overall I thought this was great.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet story i loved it, you kept the sweetness of peter pan while adding the adult themes, good job!!!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. This is without a doubt the best story I've ever read on this site. I'd tell you why, but... well, you restated time and time again that you were going for realism, so I don't need to point it out to you. Suffice to say that this is damn good, and I would heartily recommend it to anybody.
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is the most perfect fan fiction I have ever read. It actually manages to capture the characters as they would be after the story and take them farther than any mainstream publication could.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I loved it!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Good characters, nice story, and lots of smut. Seriously, though, you portrayed the coming-of-age very well for the both of them. Keep up the writing.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish it didn't end. That story was so sweet. I liked how you took the characters of Peter Pan and actually used some of their characteristics in your story. (like Peter being ignorant to things because he was not exposed to it; the sex and what a husband was) Some people just use the names and the characters are nothing like that. Write another.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. That was a good read. Really. So, any plans on writing a sequel? Hehe. Anyway, I just want to say that this is the first story I read here in AdultFF.net. Actually, I was really looking for a Wendy/Peter fic so that's it. Hey, there's a couple of typos in your story... but your story's good. Hehe.. love the smuttiness.. it's the first time i read an R-rated Peter Pan fic.. and it was a fun read. Really. I'd be glad to read more of your stories...