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That was an amazing story. I had only just seen the Peter Pan movie for the first time recently and decided to see if there was any good fanfiction out there. Yours has definately impressed me. Good work, and keep it up.

Very interesting story...and quite plausible considering that Peter Pan really would have no way of knowing the basics that we take for granted concerning such things...after all, we are educated about sex at quite early ages now...and through media and such we become educated in sexuality. He would have no way of learning such things in Neverland, ne?

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Chiruken

Great story. I like how you tried to describe emotions and reactions in such a realistic and innocent way. This is a rare talent, and it made the story a pleasure to read. Thanks, and keep up the great work (eg. by writting more wonderful stories).

this was the best show, the peter pan flick, and i like this ending so much better :)

I first read this along time ago and didn't post a review and I'm sad I didn't. This story has haunted me for so long now that I took the time and found it again. I feel you really captured the spirit of the movie and add the ending I always wanted. Thank you.

Great fic! Loved it!

Absolutely beautiful! I checked Peter Pan once before and was turned off by all the M/M stories so I was pleasantly surprised to see this one. You handled their innocence and love for one another so well! The characters matched the movie ones perfectly. I loved how he was still shying away from the word 'love' but at the end he finds the courage to say it. It was sweet and wonderful and very satisfying since I keep wanting to kick Wendy for leaving and Peter for not going. When I saw the movie my daughter and I both cried and cried. I guess she's growing up to be as hopeless a romantic as I am. Thanks for giving this story a wonderful closure!

This was so wonderfully sweet and romantic. Thank you for keeping the innocent, passionate tone of the book and the movie. I'm a sucker for happy endings, despite my love of ocassional angst...and I was smiling and sighing through the whole thing, feeling like I was deeply in love myself. It was so exciting, too, and so funny! I love the description of Peter's ignorant recital of what it means to be a "husband." That was just priceless...and the conversations about virginity...I found myself wishing that there was an easier attitude toward such things in our own world. (Because some repressive thoughts in that score linger still, eh?)
Wonderful job. I'm glad I stumbled across it. Feel weepy and a little sad, but good, too.
Much Love,
Madame

!!!!!!!!!!!!Wow!!!!!!!!!!! what can i say but... I LOVED IT!!! =D I never thought about Wendy staying with Peter...
That was (is?) a really creative idea...
And explaining the change of Peter to boy to... young man...
the only thing about it that kinda made it not as good as a "5" vote is the grammar and stuff but other than that it was great!

You're a great writer! Lots and Lots of talent...
Great Job! =)

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