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Brilliant! You wanted to stay to to the characters, and you did. I love how you blended a sweet epilogue with romance - and good smut! Thank you for such a wonderful story.

MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and by jolly gove you have a talent, you have en unequivical god honest talent harbour it and I hope to read more !!!


Phantom

OH MY GOD. I was afraid that I was the only one who got ridiculously turnn fon for the duration of this movie. I am definitely a major closet pedaphile. The sexual tensionin the movie was amazing, which you captured beautifully. It made me so happy that someone who can write so well saw the beauty and angst and hotness of Peter/Wendy (and I am almost totally for M/M unless the pairing is super taboo) but I love this couple. The movie was fricken porn for me, so this was extremely, wonderfully pleasing. Very well done. Keep it up. If you like Troy,R, PR, Pirates or Harry Potter, those are gloriously hot books for which to write fanfiction, and I'd totally seek you out to read any more than you've written. Awesome job. You made my week!!

your writing is ame! me! excellent imagery and threshing out the characters' thoughts and feelings. very tastefully done. it's really sweet. this is the first time i've read a peter pan fic and i was not disappointed

i thought all of your descriptions were wongerful and i felt as if i was wendy and that all happened to me. all i can say is, great job and keep them coming!
(p.s. you're really goood at male/ female scenes)

*claps hands loudly* oh most excellent
wonderful wonderful juts like i imagined it would be but never had the determination to write
fantasic
you give me much o dream about for nights to come thank you

That. Was one. Of the BEST fics I have ever read! So... fairytale-like, innocent, sweet and completely romantic! I adored it! A story like this is a rare find. I could imagine everything perfectly and best of all, it wasn't just sex, it was making love. First times. And I loved it. Well done to you!
N.B: I wonder if they'd ruin this if they made it into a film?!?!

it was an excellent story and it acuratly described the changes from child hood to adult hood. please wite more and dont spare any detail. it was the best!!!!!

Wow, that was just so wonderful. I was so happy when the new live action Peter Pan came out and even mor excited when i learned that it showed the romantic relationship between Wendy and Peter that i had always felt should be there. This story only makes me even happier. There is a proper discovery stage, courtship and then passion. Thank you so much for finally writting the true and just story of Peter Pan. Thanks again, so very very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! What a great story!kindkinda stumbled upon this (I've r evr even read a Peter Pan fic before) and I love it! You are truly a gifted author. I like how you kept Peter & Wendy (and even Mrs.Darling!) in character. Wendy was still ignorant but knowing at the same time, very much a girl becoming a woman. Peter was cocky and arrogant, yet unsure and, ex, exactly the way I would imagine a boy/young man who was completely ignorant of the world would be. And you wrote the steamy scenes well to! I love that you avoided all the irritating cliches - sweet "bodily fluids" (I wish!), climaxing at the same time, instinctivily knowing how to give the other pleasure. It was very true to what young people just discovering sex and sexuality encounter. Again, very well done! I can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the good work!