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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. The plot was very good and well written. :-)
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi...I started trying to read your story, but it is very, very difficult to do so as there are no spaces between paragraphs. When reading on a computer screen in particular one needs breaks between paragraphs to read. Your story would be read much more if you went through and edited to put line breaks between all the paragraphs. I'll go back and try to read some, at this time I don't really have feedback on the story itself, it's just the formating is so hard to read.
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Also, well written.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was my first major story on the AFF site...And I loved this ending. Sad about her family, of course, but glad she and cptn are together. thanks for an AWESOME story!!!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. Now you might want to make all the readers happy by writing a sequel.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Wendy
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December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great! but is this the end? It does seem a perfect ending..well anyway, keep on writing. ^-^
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, i hope you continue!!!!
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story please dont stop please please please
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story, but would it kill you to separate teh paragraphs?