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I apologize to all of you who have been trying to keep up with this story. I realize that my updating has been sporadic at best. Unfortunately, there has been a lot of things going on in my life as of late. Before it was a combination of school, computer dying, and trips abroad, but also, recently my mother passed away, and dealing with that stuff as well as everything else has caused many problems. But anyway, thank you very much for all of your faithful readerships, and hopefully soon I will have new chapters for all of you to enjoy.

-LadyNightshade-

Oh man! I love this! You're such a good writer! The chapters need to be a little longer, though. ;) You've caught Peter's character perfectly.

HOT DAMN. I hope you're still working on this.

please, please write more. i need to know what happens >.>

love to you for actually having a plot, too!

Hurry and update. I like the story and I want to find out what happens.

Oh, my child... Have not known? The true trend in your OFC's is that they are mild Mary-Sues. (blue-violet? Sorry; not genetically possible) But at least no full Mary-Sues. But the whole, "cynical, street-smart, gone-through-more-than-canon thing is the generic description of this new breed of Mary-Sue. She is more "realistic," the usage of former word I state in only the broadest sense; she doesn't have an old-style name like Elizabthia or Tel' Lindir *No ofence, ZeeDrippyVessel*, but she is used wuite frequently. I do, however, commend your correct grammatical usage and lack of spelling errors. You ar not a Mary-Sue authoress, only an authoress caught with a Mari Su. Change your characters; less perfect. Make her a bit angry. Oh, and, her parents' death is a common Mary-Sue, I'd suggest not using it again unless it's canon. Otherwise, I enjjoyed it.

Very unusual, but interesting. Is Tiger-lily going to fit into this? Also, how old is Peter?

Never ever thought I would witness peter do that. O.o *Cough!.* Anyways, please continue, I wanna read more, its a great story, and im curious as to what will happen. You're doing great. ^_^

oh my god! that was absolutely delicious!
btw. i would love to beta for you. n.n your story is soooooooooo good!

I love it. It's so innocent and sensual! It's so great.