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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a little skeptical about reading Peter Pan storys at first but I realy like yours. Hope you up date soon. :)
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Peter and the Lost Boys seem almost corrupt in their youth and innocence.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good, keep going.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like it a lot :)
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You updated again! I are giddy with joy. So giddy that my grammar fails me. Hooray! Great Work.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A truly enjoyable story, here. I didn't stop until i had read the whole thing through! I like the idea of having a original character thrown in amongst them, especially one that is as likeable as yours. Also, it is a joy to read any fan fiction story that has a believable plotline, good dialogue and good spelling! Keep up the good work!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you keep on quiting before it gets good..........stop it
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you have heard of something called a "Mary Sue," but I'm getting the feeling that Lily might be one. Look up Mary Sue Litmus test on google.com and test her. I might be wrong, but Lily seems a little too perfect to be very believable. Other than that, I like your story very much.
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should really keep going with this story- It's fantastic. I may be a new reader, but I think that You are a fantastic writer. KEEP GOING!!!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep up the great work