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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals in obvious delight*
yay, 4 new chappies!
lol, great job..can't wait to see more^^
Thanxies! ^.~
~Alesser *still in of aof author's talent*
yay, 4 new chappies!
lol, great job..can't wait to see more^^
Thanxies! ^.~
~Alesser *still in of aof author's talent*
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another chapter!!!!!!
I really like Nap, and I love the way you play with Peter's innocense and cockiness. His arrogance has always seemed to be a cover to me, to hide any embarassment of feelings of inadequacy over his memory loss.
So, the mermaids look like Peter... Peter's a father!!!! Genius, I'd have never thought of that.
I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Is Nap really going to try to force Peter to grow up? Will Nap grow up? Will he succeed?????
Forgive me if I don't review every chapter, sometimes I forget. the PP sections on this site don't seem to get many reviews, either, and very few ppl leave more than one review. But yes, 3 reviews is definitely too few for this wonderful fic.
I really like Nap, and I love the way you play with Peter's innocense and cockiness. His arrogance has always seemed to be a cover to me, to hide any embarassment of feelings of inadequacy over his memory loss.
So, the mermaids look like Peter... Peter's a father!!!! Genius, I'd have never thought of that.
I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Is Nap really going to try to force Peter to grow up? Will Nap grow up? Will he succeed?????
Forgive me if I don't review every chapter, sometimes I forget. the PP sections on this site don't seem to get many reviews, either, and very few ppl leave more than one review. But yes, 3 reviews is definitely too few for this wonderful fic.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the concept you've created. The innocent forgetful Peter vs. the not so innocent Peter with in tact memories...oh, the places you can go with this. I look forward to it.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really awesome story! Heh, two Peters, one forgetful and the other not. I don't see Nap retaining his innocense long, or his childhood. I can't wait to read more, you definitely must continue!!!
Love your style, your word choice echoes Barrie's, and makes me think of the book instead of the movies or cartoon episodes.
Love your style, your word choice echoes Barrie's, and makes me think of the book instead of the movies or cartoon episodes.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! i want more! ::pouts::
i only checked this story out because of sheer curiousity & now i want more dammit..
*Ahem* PwEaSe!! *puppy-dog eyes*
Thankoo! lol
~Alesser*Being~ *is jealous of your writing style*
p.s..email me if you update, k?
i only checked this story out because of sheer curiousity & now i want more dammit..
*Ahem* PwEaSe!! *puppy-dog eyes*
Thankoo! lol
~Alesser*Being~ *is jealous of your writing style*
p.s..email me if you update, k?