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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
val makes me laugh at loud. good writing, looking forward to new chapter.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you ever review this is startign to get iritating
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come to the darkside we have cookies give me more more more i tell you remember we have cookies
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodgoodgood!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay Apollo! I like this chick already. She's tough; she's super natural; she's is totally awesome! More More onegai!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and entertaining story. I appears, however, that you quit writing. Did your muse leave you? Do you need chocolate? BTW, you do need a beta.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Cool story. You write very well, all interesting-ly! Love the story. I really, ReAlLy, REALLY hope that you continue this story. Also, it might be cool if she talked some more about what she is, how the Shadow Land is, if she dreams about it, why she likes/dislikes/doesn't think much about her abilities, and who trained her or how did she find out she had these abilities. Please, PlEaSe PLEASE continue with this story. I'm lovin' it!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! You have a great beginning and I can't wait to find out what happens when she tells Jason. Also, when does her link with Asher come in? You've got the history down and the stage set, now let's see some aciton! This is great work, but your typo's get in the way sometimes.
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
luv it. Please update soon!!!!!!