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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done, perfect 10. You have a rare talent for writing that should be blossomed more.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Suuch a beautiful fic!!! You've totally outdone yourself; the character interactions, dialoge, and emotions were spot on! I was nearly in tears at the end, but I'm glad it ended the way it did; it wouldn't have been nearly as poignent or given the characters as much of a chance for development if they'd all lived happily ever after. I hope you'll decide to write more stories soon!!!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have me in tears right now, and trust me, that is a feat in and of itself.
Take that as the highest compliment from me. On a technical level, you are an accomplished writer. On an emotional level, you are incredible. Everyone is very much in-character, and the plot is believable, not to mention the emotions of the characters. The last paragraph ties up the story nicely. WOW!!!
Eagerly awaiting Incubus Dreams
Take that as the highest compliment from me. On a technical level, you are an accomplished writer. On an emotional level, you are incredible. Everyone is very much in-character, and the plot is believable, not to mention the emotions of the characters. The last paragraph ties up the story nicely. WOW!!!
Eagerly awaiting Incubus Dreams
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, I absolutely loved it.
Heartbreaking and emotional.
Thank you
GrrArrg
Heartbreaking and emotional.
Thank you
GrrArrg
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautifully written. The characterization was very well done and the story line was realistic and riveting. i loved reading every second of your story. Please continue writting AB fanfic. i promise i'll read it all.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it felt like I was reading the actually novel. I luved every moment of this fic. I hope you continue to write more AB fics and any other fics of your choosing. ^__^
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will try this a second time. Last time my computer went all wonky on me.
I just finishe reading Consequences. Wow!!
You gently wove together characters, events and emotion in a gripping tale. Your story evoked true emotion. It was poignant and touching without venturing into the ridiculous or melodramatic.
Well done!
I hope to read more from you in the future.
Thanks for a good read.
I just finishe reading Consequences. Wow!!
You gently wove together characters, events and emotion in a gripping tale. Your story evoked true emotion. It was poignant and touching without venturing into the ridiculous or melodramatic.
Well done!
I hope to read more from you in the future.
Thanks for a good read.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a very wondeful story. Excellent ending, excellent flow, believable, etc, etc. Wonderful.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey well I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your fiction! It was so good it could have been an actual Anita Blake novel! Only without the big monster bad guy! You're really talented! Beth.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow. I have really loved reading your story and I'm kind of sad to see it end. I was mad at first when you had Anita loose the baby, but you really got the story back on track quickly with deep thoughts and moving scenes. Anita was very much in character and I loved the demension you added to the secondary characters. All in all I absolutely loved this fanfic and you did a wonderful job writing it!