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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I actually cried. Those were exactly Anita's last words....even if they weren't really her last.
So, so so good. I never cry, and you made me. The character development is incredibly talented.
The gifts were wonderful, the twists stunning and breathtaking,
So, so so good. I never cry, and you made me. The character development is incredibly talented.
The gifts were wonderful, the twists stunning and breathtaking,
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, my computer went insane. I just wanted to thank you for brightening large portions of my life.
I love your grasp of Anita’s character.And what everyone’s said to her….perfect. Thanks for letting Richard be as I always hoped Richaouldould be. I knew there was reason to hope. Good job.
I love your grasp of Anita’s character.And what everyone’s said to her….perfect. Thanks for letting Richard be as I always hoped Richaouldould be. I knew there was reason to hope. Good job.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my....God. Awesome. I can't believe it's done. Dammit. So very, very good. Exactly correct.
Not altogether perfect, but if you ever want to write more, I'd be glad to buy it from you.
Or if you ever need like, um, anything at all, ask......just because you're awesome. Wow. Nice.
I love the ending, I love Micah's words, I love Anita's realizations, I love it all.
Yummy sex, gut-clenching twists, laughter and tears. What more could I want?
Thanks, I'm well satiated. You rock. I think I'll last till Incubus Dreams now...only a month and a half.
Not altogether perfect, but if you ever want to write more, I'd be glad to buy it from you.
Or if you ever need like, um, anything at all, ask......just because you're awesome. Wow. Nice.
I love the ending, I love Micah's words, I love Anita's realizations, I love it all.
Yummy sex, gut-clenching twists, laughter and tears. What more could I want?
Thanks, I'm well satiated. You rock. I think I'll last till Incubus Dreams now...only a month and a half.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful well written story.
I look forward to your next effort.
I look forward to your next effort.
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August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Anita will recover soon.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully written.
I don't know what else to say.
I don't know what else to say.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. I think your characters are dead-on and the plot is intrigueing. I almost cried in the last chapter! Please keep up the excellent writing!
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She lost the baby. That's so sad. It made me want to cry. Your story is really good so far. Please continue, every time I find a good Anita fanfic the author seems to forget about it.
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best please more.......
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They found her. Great.
But she lost the baby. That's awful.
More soon please.
But she lost the baby. That's awful.
More soon please.