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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - fantastic I am absolutely hooked hope you write more soon very very soon
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your story so far.
Please update soon!!
Please update soon!!
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have an interesting set up. A sidhe-weretiger being chased by Padma in Jean Claud's circus. I like how you bypassed him in honor of Asher. He's not that well utilized so you can go in many directions with him as your main character. Is he going to be your romantic lead? Will Padma attack the circus for her? Why does he want her so badly, besides the fact that she is a sidhe? I hope you plan to write more. You are at the point where your story can go in many directions. Good work. P.S. the typos detract from enjoying your writing.
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's very good. How, it, it would be more suited to an original fic, unless you're not trying to follow LKH's style. It's too formal for her style, but I really like your style. It's a good story, too. Excellent discription of the were's eye. It would be nice if we knew better who was talking.