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Horatio: (aside)
Mayhaps for he to mount and fill my corpse.

AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! ok, i'm no pro in the english language but i was filled with absolute delight while reading this fic. it's short and i wish it were longer. also that you do continue this. i love how you tried to keep it in playwrite, and i'm just giddy at the thought of horatio hooking up with fortinbras! now if only we had more shakespare slash on AF. =)

thank you for the fic!
much love~!

It's wonderful? simply awesome!;)
I like the whole idea and your mimic writing style is also well done.
The real Shakespeare fanfiction I guess.;)

It's a valiant effort at Shakespearean prose, but (obviously) doesn't match the man himself. That being said, definitely one of the things worth reading around here.

Wow. This is really cool. It reminds me slightly of a fic I wrote and am about to post here. It is altogether awesome; good job!

Great job, except your iambic pentameter is not iambic. That is just really bothering me, but besides that, this is really good.

it was vey interesting.....you've got shakespeare's language down pat. congragulations. that's quite an achievement. I'll keep reading to see how this goes....

Since I am a slash!whore I've been meaning to get around to reading Hamlet slash. Yours definitly struck a chord. I'd love it if you continued it, and maybe some Fortinbras/Horatio? Even after F's last speech. You're really good at writing this and I like how you keep the chap's short so as not to overstress the iambic.

Interesting. Imabic pentameter is difficult to write, still more so is to keep up the word play and connontations of Shakespeare. Iambic pent is down in this fic, which, kudos, is good. Not getting the double meaning that Shakespeare imbues his work with, which is something to work on. It's a little too straightforward, you should need to find the deeper meaning behind the words.

But not everyone can write Shakespeare. So yeah, good work.