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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hook is so evil! I am looking forward to more. eagerly looking forward to more. This is a great story! The best Peter Pan story I have read. update soon.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eh, but, ah, no, wait! Not fair! want more.... please? * whimpers *
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!! You not only kept me on the edge of my seat but you also left me wanting more. The ending of this chapter was perfect with Wendy and Hook staring at each other and the rest of the world silent. Bravo. Please update soon.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVE this story! Indeed, poor Wendy, she has no idea what she's getting into. Let it be bad... *wink* Please continue with writing! It's wonderful and original.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story keeep the chapters coming
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Just enough to "hook" us in. More soon, please.
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting beginning and I look forward to read more. You do know that it can be a double meaning to Hook saying that he is going to kill her? An orgasm is not called "the little death" for nothing...
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am eagerly looking forward to your next update. I guess I will have to be content with watching Peter Pan, again.
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good beginning! you got the characters just right. I can't wait for the next part! update soon. please.