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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story i read from beginning to end in two days! please have many sequels!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That is all I can say... Brilliantly done! Simply wonderful!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Thank you for the pleasure of reading it.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I am sad to see this story end, I agree that this is a good way to end it. I loved the interaction between Hook and Wendy. The idea of Hook having to "meet the parents" and listen to the "Dad Lectures" is hilarious.
I hope you do write some spin-off stories soon, 'cause I'm gonna need a fix!
Thank you for sharing your talent.
I hope you do write some spin-off stories soon, 'cause I'm gonna need a fix!
Thank you for sharing your talent.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I loved it!!! But it doesn't have to end, I would love to read about their children and maybe Elizabath and Peter finding their way back to Neverland. Great writing, I have thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter (probably twice!) and always looked forward to your postings.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what way you do it I just want MORE
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where are ny hankies! Lovely ending, but I'm very sad to see it end. Even though it doesn't really have to end, you can always have little ficlets with their life in Neverland. Thank you for finishing this, and sharing it with us.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm sad it's over. Maybe you could do an epilogue someday. Either way, I really enjoyed your story. I hope you write more for this pairing!!
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. It needs some editing, but its a great plot. Perfect dialogue for the characters. It was the perfect adult ending to a child's fairy tale.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLease update please