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person DArk Topaz
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that is not the end
person celticreeder
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just soo cute! You have captured both Hook's and Wendy's characters in such a way that they never get too ridiculous. I look forward to the next chapter. There just aren't enough good Hook/Wendy pairings.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not every chapter can be adventure filled. I liked this one. I'm curious about Peter escaping, and I'm hoping it won't mean any trouble for our lovebirds. I'm glad Wendy told Hook how she feels. I'll be looking for more. Thank you for updating.
person Rainbow
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.
person Thunder Rose
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I didn't think chapter 23 was boring at all! It was romantic and Hook finally got Wendy's hidden kiss! I'm sure Peter's escape will provide some interesting reading in the future. I have really enjoyed this story so far and look forward to more!
person Dark Topaz
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this if you are going to
person Avanell
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see some new chapters here! How funny it was for her brothers to get all huffy and upset, mother calm yet concerned, and dad just confused. And how will millicent feel about her niece and husband sleeping in the bed she's been using? ha-ha!!!
person ladyfogg
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
agh! No! No, dont stop! Keep going! I must know what happens!
person szara
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was brilliant, really brilliant. Yet another (fan)fictional villian I`ve fallen in love with. Hook´s SO charming, Wendy´s wonderfully cheeky and her family, especially John, is totally in character. I love it! Please update soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter! I wanted to throttle the boys, but I suppose its a normal reaction. Hook was so charming. I can't wait for more.
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