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Loved it! really great chapter, i look forward to every update. And as far as your details, they seemed quite real. Keep up the good work.

Oh boy. I think things are going to get pretty interesting. Thanks for posting!

I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! YOU ARE VERY VERY VERY TALENTED WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am absolutely LOVING this story! Every chapter is surprising and delighting! I love their chemistry! You've done a wonderful job with both of their personalities! I really can't say enough!

Oh, thank you for updating. Great chapter. But I'm super curious as to how Wendy's family will react to Hook, especially her brothers.

I haven't gotten all the way through it (there are a lot of chapters!), but I am really enjoying your story! If you don't mind, I like your idea of the "other side" of the island, and I think I might use something like it, if you don't mind. I have some ... stuff coming in my fic, and that is a wonderful device.

Such a fitting setting for her to giver her family the presents, don't you think? How convenient. On that note I would like to say that you need to write more, as do I. Both of us have been 'long gone' of late. You beat me to updating though. Oh, I was also wondering if there would be anything between Miss Jane, James, and Wendy? However, Miss Jane does seem to be smitten with the rapidly growing Stutter. I still think it would be interesting to have that little threesome, or at the very least have Miss Jane apply to ~all~ Wendy's needs. I don't think I like Wendy/James stories but yours I do. Only in your story do they truly fit. Very well done with the conveniences.

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This Peter Pan story is so different from all the others I've read. It's a very nice change too! Hook is still ruthless and sometimes cruel but he is capable of softer, nicer feelings: I really love the way Wendy and Hook have found each other in this fic and that they have such an amusing and yet very tender relationship. I'll certainly continue reading this fic. We're going to London!!

Congratulations!!!!! Loved the new chapter, have been waiting for an update and was worth the wait. Keep up the good work, when you can.

Loved it! Wow...that is so funny considering something I've written but has to wait a couple of more chapters for my story...but loved how it occured in yours! That is: Wendy overboard! And I'm still waiting for them to get back to London...I'm hoping that we'll get to see that nasty aunt's reaction? And the others, of course...Please write more soon!!!