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Woops! Forgot...CONGRATULATIONS!!!

excellent as always!

You naughty author! So short and PWPish and smutty. The plot totally went out the window for that chapter. So if they're even 'for now' can she do something to make it uneven? * has an idea * hehe * grins evilly * How about she wakes him up with a surprise? He is having a lovely dream about her and it's getting him a bit bothered, if you know what I mean, and she decides to pay him back for the attention he gave her this last time. So he wakes up with a bold little Wendy head between his legs. * grins mischievously * Oh you are so evil! I love you! And this story! Okay...gotta run and read for English class (Iliad which isn't bad but I have to do a dumb Venn Diagram). I can't wait for more !

ta

Thanks for updating. I love this story, and this chapter was hot hot hot hot!!!!!

* dances to the spanish music she has playing for her spanish project due Wednesday * Soboutbout that. I'm still enjoying your story very much and I can't wait for the next chapter to come. You really are horrible, sending Pan to you know where. Anyhow, I loved this most recent chapter and can't wait for you to update. I will try to do likewise. * runs off to write and then fall into the arms of dear Morpheus * night....ta

Not very good? No, no, no! This was a lovely chapter, thank you so much for updating. I look every day, just in case. I can't wait for James to meet her parents, I have a feeling it will be quite interesting.

Please tell that muse of yours to get cracking!

I love this story! It is sooo cute, please continue.

I loved this story!!! I've just spent about an hour and a half reading the entire thing and I love it!! Truly an inspired theme, I think you captured that side of Hook that all men try and conceal. You also hit on the one weakness that affects us all - child or adult - love and affection. They are a two sided sword. Not until my son was born did I realize you could actually have so much love for someone that you'd do ANYTHING to protect them. But that love also works against you if their well-being is put in jeopardy, like a bargaining chip. It's a fine line between sanities! Kepp up the great work!

Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.

Please update again soon.

Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.

Please update again soon.