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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.
Please update again soon.
Please update again soon.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a complaint! Not long enough! Tee-hee...I just KNEW that would be Peter's punishment (at least, it is what I hoped...what I would do...am I that wicked, too?!!) Loved the ups,ups, the bedside talk, and stutter stuff, too! Can't wait to see more more more!!! That's how we comment at the Jix board...we rave and rant for more!!!
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Almost crying here! I'm probably going to in a minute or so. How cruel! Make Peter Pan become a man! * sniffs * I do so love your devious mind though. It's absolutely horrid! * grins * I can't wait to see what happens next.... ta
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You did a good job with the action. I'm glad Peter was caputred (that stupid spoiled brat!) Please update soon! Please, I know you aren't going to kill Hook. I hope!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brava Brava! You have me sitting at the edge of my seat! This story is just amazing...and recent lines about storms and seas, men being pretty, the ring engraved, and now Pan coming after Hook...I'm dying in anticipation at the edge of my seat! Wah! Hook has to live! He and Wendy must show Peter their love or kill the little imp in the process! Okay, I'm not trying to dictate here...but Hook and Wendy just BELONG together here!!! Can't wait for more...Brava!
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! Don't let that little runt hurt my Hook, PLEASE!!!!! Great chapter. Thanks for updating.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more? please? ta
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You fiend! How dare you not continue??? I need to go find a large block of ice or something. Whew. That was hot. :-)
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
* glares at you * end? no! more please * whimpe jil
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I admit I have not read alot of Pan stories.. but I cannot resist pirates!
That he has waited for her to be ready for him.. truly ready and needing.
So much better than if her had forced her at first.
I do hope you will be updating soon!
Oz
I admit I have not read alot of Pan stories.. but I cannot resist pirates!
That he has waited for her to be ready for him.. truly ready and needing.
So much better than if her had forced her at first.
I do hope you will be updating soon!
Oz