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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!! Can't waite to find out what happens next.
PS hope your feeling better from your injury
PS hope your feeling better from your injury
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope your feeling better from your injury. You truely area gifted writer, hope you contine soon.
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story, please update when you can.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! It just keeps getting better and better! I love the part where Hook ''gives'' Wendy the jewed dagger. How dashing! Soory to here you haven't been feeling well, hope you are better now. Am checking this story as often as possible, eagerly awaiting your next words! :)
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, great chapter. I'm wondering if Wendy will have a chance to use that dagger. I love how Hook is starting to realize he's got feelings for her.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is a great story. I hope you update soon. I hope Hook doesnt have something to horrible in mind for Wendy. You can tell they like each other :)
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Very nice, with the Captain sending a letter to wendy's parents, and the ' first voyage' on the necklace. I love it !
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing, the end i mean... okay, going to school now!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, a beta is short for beta reader (sometime testerit iit is a product). this person reviews your story and makes spelling, and if needed grammar corrections, then give you input on their take on the chapter for better writting. really helpful, betas... okay, as i said before, going to school now!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really like how you are writing them in your story. I can't wait to read your next chapter.