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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, a next chapter !
I'm dying, for it !
I'm dying, for it !
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like what you did with the town, and the way you have Hook and Wendy interacting with each other.
Looking forward to more, more more!
Looking forward to more, more more!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, your apologiez for make Hook a bit nice are wasted on me. Frankly I like Hook this way. Don't get me wrong, I like him nasty, but I never really thought he was totally evil.thinthink he was a very sad figure, and there was a certian need in his character. Its Peter I always hated.
Great chapter. I'm wonderihat hat he's scheming though. Please continue.
Great chapter. I'm wonderihat hat he's scheming though. Please continue.
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, whs ths the Captain thinking... i didn't say this before, but i love this story, and i cannot wait to see if it becomes a romance. i check on aff.net everyday, and i have this story favouritized for easier accessing, so i will be waiting patiently (like i do for all my favourite stories.) cannot wait for the next chapter. if you need a beta, however, i am currently free!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks, everyone! Really appreciate the reviews...chapter 5 is already in progress.
SEMI-SPOILER Melissa: What is a beta? I am new here, do not know...If it is anything like a sounding board, I may need one in a few chapters when a secret is revealed. I've got my own dilemna with it :)
SEMI-SPOILER Melissa: What is a beta? I am new here, do not know...If it is anything like a sounding board, I may need one in a few chapters when a secret is revealed. I've got my own dilemna with it :)
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so, what is her choice? i really want to know.
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love love love Hook/Wendy stories, but only if it eventuallcomecomes a romance, which I'm hoping this does. Please update soon, I'm enthralled!!!
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot, can you give us your other sites? I'd love to read more stuff. Is it Hook/Wendy related?
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whose watching her? Please update again, I have to know. Is it Hook?
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! This already shows promise for being a wonderful tale. I really can't wait to read more!