rate_review Reviews

Was looking through crossover stories for AB (I've been recently addicted) and was pleasantly surprised to find this. There are... quite a few spelling errors (although with some of those I'm not sure if it's you or if it's weird AFF formatting errors - anyway), but it was still a good read. It was very nice to find 12 chapters when I was only expecting 3 =). I figure you'll probably never update this again, seeing as it's been 4 years or something since the last update, but I thought I'd try.

=D?

I am so glad you updated since last time I checked. You do great Anya characterization. And the gay musketeer comment was too funny.

This is hilarius!!

Love Buffy, and Anya was always a fab character, gald she's getting some attention and is there a better world for it to be in than our adored Anita Blake domain?

Nice escapisim, and i'm sorry you had some vengeful muppet on your case about it, but if you write more i'll definatly be back!!

toodles

xxx

I absolutly love your story and hope that you update soon so that I can read what will happen next with Anya

This is one of the best fanfics I've read ! Action and delirious humour that made me smile through every single line read.
I also appreciate your knowledge of the characters. All of them are true to themselves, which is very rare, especially in crossovers.
I will await the next chapters with as much impatience as I await the nex AB novel. Thank you for this great moment spent with
Anya and the AB crew !
P.S. If you want to make them use some french, I can help. (I am french)

Heh heh, Ashers my fav character, I wanna know how thi turns out!! PLEASE update soon!

its pretty good. Long though. My adivice would be to seperate the chapters. Its ok to do a scene change in a chapter, but u've got a lot of chapters all at once. if you seperate them then it makes it easeier for the reader who dosen't have the time to read the whole thing. Say, u've got ten minutes left, are u going to remember where exactly u left off in that long line of story? Just a suggestion. Great plot line though. U've really caputred Anya and her sence of . . . err herself. lol. Check out my story if u want. . . Dr. Mike in ANita Blake, and The Goddess in Buffy. Lata!

Jesus this sucked.... Do all of us that read AB fiction a favor and post this utter pile of crap on the buffy boards.
You murdered Jean Claude and Asher's characters and if your going to even bother writing take the bloody time to actually write out the numbers. Lazy, illiterate, public school educated, coach potato SHMUCK!

I LOVE IT (And don't let anyone discourage you!)

Whoever gave you the bad review is soooo in touch with the "Green eyed monster".
You actually got me hooked on Anya/Anita Blake fanfiction, and I don't even like
Anya. (Hehe).

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Heh heh, Jean Claude and Asher are going to meettheir Bufee monster. heh heh, PLEASE update soon!! ^_^