rate_review Reviews

I love it! They are my favorite pairing...ever! Please continue...*mock-serious face* Or I will hunt you down. No, seriously. Continue.

AN) EEEp! Thank you everyone who loved this fic, it means a lot how highly you view this piece. Especially since it was my very first attempt at written smut of any kind! *blush* I WILL continue this but I'm in the middle of two other fics while finishing the 6th Harry Potter. (Check out my LiveJournal for comentary) I will be in 120% Sansa/Sandor mode when I pick up & then read the "A Feast For Crows" that is now out, which I will get around to doing roughly in the next three weeks. I'm sorry!! But I work 6 days a week & I get in shit if I write at work, which I did at one point & ugh!! Bun fight!! I'll ponder the anal thing... I could swing that... I'm gonna do a few more fics on these two, besides the completion of this one!! ^.--

Nicely done. Sexy, relaxed. Deep, too.

As for kink suggestions, try testing the waters with a bit of anal (teasing, playing, not necessarily fucking). Something different, something naughty. Plus I'd love to see the reaction from your shy Sansa.

Hope you continue. Though it seems it's been a while..

Oh, do continue! While I'm normally rather wary of ASOIAF fanwork (partially because I know badfic all too well and partially because of the effective ban), this is quite nice...seems very in character with both of them, especially Sansa. ^_^

Please continue, Sansa is one of my favourite characters, after Jon.

I love the fact that you begin the story by telling the background. Since we've only known Sansa as the very naïve young girl it's necessary, but you write it like it's natural, not forced. One thing that most writers miss (at leats those on not-for-profit sites like this) is the psychological part. You, however, do not. And you describe it exquisitely... "Yet, she reflected, if she had not gone through what she had, she would have learned nothing. "
And the transition you make here, from reminiscing the past to the now: "Then, she refused him. / Now--- /Now she refused him nothing." That's beautiful :)
Sandor's touching her when she's asleep is also beautiful and very erotic, as well as romantic.
:)
Good job. Do continue, please.

(And there is no surpise that you like Furey's Artefacts of Power, Earth's Children and Harry Potter. I must say that I'm quite into the same things...)

Ok... Let me just say. That was amazing. Several reasons.

1) I love the pairing, and I love that it is even semi-plausible in the context of the stories. Great work.

2) I think that the way you portrayed each character was flawless. Absolutely Flawless, I almost got the sense that RR Martain had written this little passage himself (given his propensity for sex scenes)

3) This is, bar non, THE best written adult fic I have ever read. You make it deeper than just the sex. Something a lot of authers forget to do in most of the fics I read.


Write more, I'm anxious.

-Shea

i hate the pairing but this entices me beyond all reaosn :B

and i'm going to be writing some theonxjon soon (if ti comes out X__x)

Oh! Ye! Seven! Gods! Well done! Having pegged these two characters perfectly, you then treated your reader to some highly enjoyable smut. Thank you - and please do continue!