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Total crap; you have no clue how to write ANY of the characters; your grammar is horrid. Fot Christ's sake... just take this SHIT off the site!

mmmkay. i haven't even looked at this story for like 2 years. oh and yes, i've read the canon, but thanks for asking. i hope you realize that this is a fanfiction site and not a fiction/canon site.

oh and i know the formatting blows. like i said, i haven't even looked it for 2 years. i ran out of ideas for this before i even wrote it, basically. oh well. maybe someday i'll be inspired.

~Lucifera Black

Have you even read the Canon?

What is this garbage??

Holmes is supposed to be a cold, calculating, automaton and you turn into a sex crazed maniac who screws the new girl.

Excellent sex scene, by the way, i could TOTALLY sense the RAW EMOTION.

Please, honey, for all our sakes, get a BETA.

Interesting turn in this fic, and i am very happy youhas update.

I know I'm not one to judge chapter uploading, but that is seriously a long time to wait before updating a story. I know I'm guilty of it myself, but never nearly two years later. It definitely screams of you trying to dodge the flames, which might be avoided if you upload the next chapter and continue the story? I'm looking forward to reading more, if you want to write more. Slash is okay, but Holmes/Watson is starting to get overdone and this is a nice breath of fresh air.

It's been awhile since you worked on your story, but I hope you will take it up again...I enjoyed what I read, and you sound very keen to take advice about how to develop your story and characters!. I hope you are not discouraged by HoneyB's cruel remarks...keep writing!!! If HoneyB was such a ACD purist, he/she would know that Doyle wouldn't be at all happy to see what is being written about his characters. Our Holmes/Watson fanfic isn't meant to be an extension of The Canon....it's enjoyment. Keep writing :))

Exepcional story, muy buena in my lenguage. Please update, please update, is very sexy, I am exausted of slash I love sherlock + Girls, and your account is very good.

Very sexy. I thought I was the only girl that was turned on by Serlock Homes; Maybe it's that smart, romantic thing he has going. My boyfriend thought it was wierd- I dumped him last week.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

....Have you ever actually *read* Sherlock Holmes?

I wouldn't be surprised if you haven't. Your characterization of the great detective made me want to hurl. You obviously have no grasp on his character whatsoever, nor do you seem to even care about doing him justice. You just invented a beautiful character with no personality or special traits whatsoever and threw her into bed with the normally untouchable Holmes because that's what YOU want to do. Please, stop tarnishing Sir Conan Doyle's brilliant work with your mediocre rubbish and grow the hell up.

You should be congratulated. Your story can safely be seperated from all the other Sherlock Holmes stories. You achieved a very hard goal. You mimed Doyle's style and dialog, and you did it tastefully. You really do have it down to an art. Cudos to you.