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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What country are you from, and to the point, your english isn,t bad at all, very few grammatical errors, but I cant help but feel that you need to be a bit more descriptive, since at points, it was a bit difficult to follow. Also, you seem to repeat yourself a bit. And I am I the only one who believes there was really no reason for stormy to die, that koontz killed her off for no reason, that the book could have been just as good if she survived? If you need a beta reader, you can email me at Benecube@hotmail.com with your work, and i,ll look over it, ok. Keep up the good work, Odd Thomas was a really good book.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this and hope that you continue.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Interesting ^^, don't know if it's too late for you to continue. I just read the book and odd is adorable. "puppies are adorable" XD
So yeah, pretty good for a first English fic, a few misplaced words but they don't ditract from the story. And overall very good job. A+ ^^
So yeah, pretty good for a first English fic, a few misplaced words but they don't ditract from the story. And overall very good job. A+ ^^
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job i luved it please kontinue!!! PLEEEEEEAASSEEE!!!!!!!!!!! T _ T for me? oh thats right i dont even kno u , u kould still finish it ya kno kos it was asum ur story rox